You always leave me wanting more! :XD The update was amazing. I can actually kind of relate to Frank's paycheck dilemma. :shifty And along with xXskittlesXx, you really do have an amazing writing style.
Woah. You seriously write wonderfully. It's so easy to relate too, the characters are so damn believable, and the dialogue is just -wow. sooo, I can't wait for more! and um, yeah. keep up the great work :D
I love the way this is written. It's got a taste of something different. Frank's thoughts are amusing. You make him easy to relate to. I'm excited about this story, the plot seems rather interesting. I'm anxious to learn more about Gerard. Update soon? Please?Or when you can.