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  • Eoix

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    Ah, you should write more of this story <3
    Right now <3
    July 7th, 2009 at 09:28am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    So, wait, Nathan is, like, schizophrenic? Wow. Never saw that coming. :shock:
    I liked how when David was running away, he was basically only in boxers and just grabbed the clothes and ran. Normally they're dumb enough to actually try and put their clothes on fast enough. :file:

    But that was so sad how he had to hit Nathan with a vase just to get away. Cry I hope in the end things will be okay with them.

    Update when you can, please <3
    September 22nd, 2008 at 04:57am
  • XXXconfiDANCEXXX

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    lol i love you guys : ]
    September 21st, 2008 at 06:30am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Aw, I'm glad you updated!
    Does Nathan not remember what he did to David? What's wrong with Nathan, anyway? Why does he keep acting the way he does?
    :?
    Update when you can, please <3
    September 21st, 2008 at 04:05am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Aw, that was actually really brave of his to go see a shrink. And I can only just imagine what would happen if Nathan got the bill.
    Poor David : [

    Update when you can, please <333
    August 11th, 2008 at 11:10pm
  • i-miss-u-so-far.

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    love it so far, keep it up :)
    August 11th, 2008 at 11:00pm
  • HystericxBarbie

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    OMG, this is so good! I feel so bad for David, but I'm constantly wondering what's wrong with Nathan? Does he have some sort of disease or something? Cause I'm feeling bad for him, too Cry

    *Subscribes*

    Update when you can, please <333
    July 22nd, 2008 at 12:30am
  • Kite Flyin'

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    Oh no, what's Nathan going to do!?!?
    July 18th, 2008 at 03:04pm
  • XXXconfiDANCEXXX

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    i have a rele good idea for this hehe. it's rele mean but makes sense.
    July 16th, 2008 at 07:21pm
  • Kite Flyin'

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    Oh the confusion.
    July 16th, 2008 at 05:40pm
  • Alice Verney

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    poor david nathan is so macho he doesnt care about david
    July 1st, 2008 at 05:26am
  • Squirrely.Kassi

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    I think this story was really brave of you to write, I like it... I think it's sad that Nathan is like that, but it's just like other people dating whether they're female or male... ^_^ -kassi
    June 26th, 2008 at 10:40pm
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