July 25th, 2008 at 03:27am
Cut You Up. - Comments
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That was just awesome.July 8th, 2008 at 06:34am
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Wow. Ariiieeee, that's amazing. NEVER make fun of this piece of writing, if you do I will cry. :arms:July 3rd, 2008 at 03:33am
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Simply amazing. Lovely imagery. Four is my favorite number, too. <3July 3rd, 2008 at 12:38am
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Thank you very much, but it's a one shot.- electricgirls:
- Wow. I really love this.
I can definitely see the influence of Chuck Palahniuk's writing in this and its pretty amazing :].
I can't wait to read more!
There won't be more. Sorry.June 27th, 2008 at 06:20am -
Oh, and you should've done six, not four.
Six is teh best number. :file:
Okay, I'll stop now. x)June 27th, 2008 at 06:06am -
This was awesome!
damn!
That's so romantic....
but twisted?
that's awesome!June 27th, 2008 at 06:06am -
Wow. I really love this.
I can definitely see the influence of Chuck Palahniuk's writing in this and its pretty amazing :].
I can't wait to read more!June 27th, 2008 at 06:04am -
Me love me love me love me love :cheese:
I shall leave a proper review/comment/thing when I'm alive tomorrow.
I'm at a halfway place atm, kinda dead - kinda awake, so if I left you a comment now it would be gibberish.
I loved, and I shall end this pointless comment here. (:
:arms:June 27th, 2008 at 06:03am
Again, the opening lines reminded me of Chuck Palahniuk.
His pale skin glistens in the moonlight and the ruby-red of his scars shine like diamonds.
You turn something totally creepy into something beautiful and poetic, which is what I really, really loved about this story in general. Like, you read the summary and think what the hell? But then when you read it, it's just... sjkdgnsdfgjndf flawless. And fabulous. I also love how Patrick is just so ~emo.
Science says that humans are in the deepest see
Sleep. :con: Okay, like, I just felt I should point that out. :shifty Sorry.
The last line was simply perfect. Like, the kind of perfect that leaves you wordless. That kind of perfect.
And this was a shit review, curtosy of Danielle.