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  • How He Loves

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    hey. just found your story. it ROCKS. I'm just a little confused though. Was that IT??? So the next chapter will be in the sequel?? Well, doesn't really matter all that much. JUST UPDATE SOON, OR I WILL PERSONALLY TRACK YOU DOWN, EXTRACT YOUR IDEAS FROM YOUR HEAD, AND FORCE YOU TO TYPE THEM OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =P love ya
    October 11th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • ria

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    update asap...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty please =)
    June 29th, 2010 at 01:52pm
  • morganvillevamps7

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    More, more, more. Ugh this story is so good. Please update soon. I need to know what happens.
    June 28th, 2010 at 06:31am
  • Scribble.Writing

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    <3 Hurrah! an update! How I've longed for this moment!
    June 27th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • morganvillevamps7

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    Oh my gosh. This story is awesome. I just spent the last couple of hours reading all 47 chapters all the way through. Now it is very late and I am tired. Anyway good story please update soon so I can find out what happens with Chris and Ryan.
    June 25th, 2010 at 09:38am
  • stupidshit

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    I don't like how similiar it is to Twilight, but then again, I've only read the summary. I shall try to read it, though. [:
    June 25th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • jamie717

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    i love the story..... please continue to write.
    June 10th, 2010 at 12:34pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    wow I read through 46 chapters for them to finally get together and it never happened. I confess myself disappointed.
    February 18th, 2010 at 11:11am
  • Scribble.Writing

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    Oh Jesus missy! That happened to be absolutely amazing! :D
    The long wait was forgivable enough due to your amazing and remarkable writing skills!
    I adored it!
    Continue to write as you always have, until then I will continue reading it and continue
    to praise you for those staggering writing skills! Until then! =]
    December 12th, 2009 at 12:50am
  • And_Lucy_Loves_Me

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    Lovee it!!!!
    December 11th, 2009 at 09:52pm
  • Americana

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    OK...

    Dude, I've just got to say, I love your writing style :D I think it's really awesome. I would've commented earlier, but I wanted to get to the end first...the greatest thing about it is that it feels real, and you're not like, jumping into it really fast. Loads of people always critise stories if somebody hasn't died, fallen in love, and/or jumped off a cliff in the first chapter *eye roll*, so I love it :)

    I've noticed though, that you don't update all that often, so please do!

    Since I like your writing style so much, and you actually seem to know what you're doing (so rare lol), could you please just check out my stories: Me & Thee and Sugar & Spice, and like, give me a bit of feedback?

    Cheers,
    Frangipani ;)
    December 11th, 2009 at 01:37am
  • Poison Apple

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    Well worth the wait! I hope you update again soon [=
    December 10th, 2009 at 08:10pm
  • ria

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    i'm glad you updated!
    ...can we have more Ryan please? =)
    December 10th, 2009 at 02:34pm
  • MisCree

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    I love this story! X} I left Quizilla to read it here, that's how kick-ass this story is. Amazing work!
    June 28th, 2009 at 04:47am
  • lovealwayshurts

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    i have been so freaking busy lately that i have be able to read the updateds...
    And i cant express how much i loved them when i finally read them...i cant wait for the next one....pwease update soon *big sad puppy eyes*
    June 21st, 2009 at 05:10am
  • Devil's_ Angel_Demon

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    i luv ur story1! hurry and update plz!!
    June 16th, 2009 at 11:37pm
  • thoughtology.

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    *sniffsniff* Love the story, hate the new chapter.
    June 12th, 2009 at 05:42am
  • KlutzSince'94

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    Very good update... if I were alone, I'd be crying!
    June 12th, 2009 at 03:24am
  • ria

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    holy @#$% !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    you better run young lady! i'm already tracking you down!
    ...actually Alfred is doing so for me =D =P
    June 11th, 2009 at 09:05pm
  • gardetoncoeur

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    =O!!! I can't believe what happened in the last chapter you put!
    Is there going to be anymore?!?!

    Curious. :|
    June 11th, 2009 at 07:56pm