I just gotta ask... Where is the twins with one.... or for that matter both of the girls? There see that could be a good idea... besides Cam and Jace.... dream team.
Hmm well I won't make this comment quite as long as the last one! That was probably a pain in the ass to read! Haha anyways I absolutely loved the last chapter! So much drama . . . I wonder who's trying to steal the babies this time! Oooh and I'm very very excited for Elzie to get to use her coupons =b That should be a good time for all of us! I know you said the next update would be a while but I can't wait anyways! I'm . . . readdicted to this story!
I'm really glad I found this story again. I'd read the prequel and the first few chapters of this one, and then I forgot to subscribe and I couldn't find the story again. Therefore I'm making this comment extra long to make up for all my past missed comments. My favorite character is Elzie. Idk why, I just really like her a lot. Tweak isn't my favorite though. I think the duo I like best is when Elzie and Jace have fun. For some reason, those two are the hottest together in my mind, but only for when they "have fun." Haha if you know what I mean. I still like Elzie and Blade together-together and I still like Layla and Jace together-together. I also like it when Jason and Ian are thrown into the mix. The more people in for some fun the better =D I've loved the plot of this story from the first chapter of the prequel, and it's got everything in it! Romance, shape-shifters, action, death, adventure, sex! This is probably going to sound kinky (oh well) but I think it would be awesome if the final chapter included all the 6 main characters just in for a big orgy. Hahahaha, I know . . . but I think it would be very sexy. So you two are fantastic writers and just keep up the great work! And don't be offended by the preference for Elzie, because I can probably actually relate more to Layla. She's more the hard-ass, sarcastic bitchy type, and that's just me =] Therefore, it doens't make sense for me to like Elzie more, but I just do. I can't wait for the next chapters! I hope this comment made up for some of the people who don't comment and it could count as like 5 or something because it's so damn long!
Thing is, I'm a lurker and I've just read about half the story because I'm a total idiot who forgot I organized my inbox to do that thing where it puts all your emails in the correct folder and I haven't checked it in....... *facepalm*
Anyway, story = <3 If I were Elzie, they wouldn't see me for a loong time, I hate when people do all that mean ish so you don't realize what they're doing...