Winters Storm. - Comments

hmm....I wonder what happens next?

Okay, okay.. And you said this is not up to par with your one-shots!? I beg to differ, ma'am. These were just wonderful. I love it and you should love it too Because you're just so brilliant with your words and the way you detail. Spot-on dialogue, spot-on personality. Everything was just peachy :)

You should continue this ^^

just read it and thought you really should continue this one up. i wonder whats up next :D

Dude you're so good.
They should hire you to write Supernatural episodes. :XD

They would probably be really biased :tehe: But bloody fuckin' good nonetheless.

Story Review Game:

I would start with the fact that this story reads very well and flows easily. The humor between the two brother brings a lighter side to the suspence that is going on the murders. I found that really helped put on show their individual personalities. And it also made for a few laughs. :]

There were very little grammatical errors that I noticed except for a couple of run-on sentences. The description that you used made it easy to imagine, even the gore, but it made it that much more realistic. I am really looking forward to finding out what or who's behind the murders. It's an addicting story once you start reading.

this is really good.
:)
i like it.
more soon?

Love it vee :]

Whoa.
That was awesome!
*thumbs up*
lol at Dean, i can seriously see him playing eye spy on a hunt lmfao XD
Great update!

Awesome update, you never fail to amuse me Vee (: Keep it up, and update when you can?

Amazing update :D

Haha, I did a little dance when this was updated.
Psh, you woulda done the dance too, I know it.
Ohkay, maybe I don't. BUT WOOH FOR THE UPDATE!

Loved it. Now I should go read Touch Too Much. Your Supernatural stories are the only ones I really read. XD
Update soon!

Oh. My. God.
i loved the update (:
nice ending (Y)

update soon missus! xD

xoxox

:D An update!
And it was awesome!
More soon?

Oooooohhh yay :)
I've been waiting for this to be updated.
Your writing is amazing, you can really imagine it being part of a Supernatural episode
:)

This story is just sooo amazing. I am in love with the Winchester brothers. ♥ & you've done such a wonderful job with them in the story.
I cannot wait for more. Update asap (:
*subscribes*

I Absoutly love this. It's amazing! I can't for more.

Wow! I love this. i need moreeeee!
It's so realistic...and everything everyone above me has said i agree with!
MORE NOW! :)

So this is seriously amazing :]
Haha you said I got Dean down really well? Ha. You've perfected him babe.
I love it :]
I really love how you go into details and stuff. And this story is seriously so well-written. Really, It's awesome!

Loved it.
It was just like a real-life Supernatural episode.
:]
You're an awesome writer.
I'll have to check out your other stuff too.

So I got your story comment earlier and I literally just finished reading the last update.
You need to update holy hell, this story is addictive - Like, the way you captured the boys are like, to a T!
I'm so hooked on this story:D