Rise Of A Elemtion - Comments

Sounds good, but who exactly is Ifron? Sure he sounds elf and all but he just pops in out of no where. And some sentences aren't capitalized at the begining. Uber amounts of potential though. If you've ever read Eragon? It sounds like a mix of that and Lord of the Rings. Final verdic: pretty good.

ok i fixed my signature:)

ty all for ur niceness.....soon the writing will increase. however i still have to make a character list for my coauthor

^.^
Thats awesome..
lol. Ur sweet.

hmmmm i need to go fix my signature.....

ok to peacelovenfantasy no i actually came up with them. and to courtney she is either third or second on my frineds list

hey smexy

whos ur co-author?

U must have reeli did research for the names. So far its good.