Losing Grip. - Comments

You know how I feel about this story.
And you know I want more :P
I swear you didn't have six chapters before...if you did I'd forgotten :P
SO! Therefore I shall just have to tell you that chapter six was awesomeeeee and Seans mum gives good advice :D
Okay...
Bye :)
xx

"I wished I were worth staying for. "

Best line.
(Y)

I love this.
Keep updating =)

:arms:

This update was marvelous and this story is so good.

Lee's girlfriend sounds intriguing :XD

And Ian acting like a model...priceless! :tehe:

You've got a nice contrast between the happy sections and the sad sections. You can see that Sean is really upset inside because Ian's leaving, but he's not wanting to show it.

The last few paragraphs were really moving. Sean's mum is picking up on the fact that Sean's sad and the things she said were really kind-hearted and sweet.

aww!
sean's so cute bless him
i think ian's a bit insentive tbh.
:file:
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:D:D:D
YOU UPDATED!
That made me so happy.
Aww!
They're so sweet when they're together
then Sean gets all upset. =[ Rips me apart man!!!
He should listen to his mummy.
Mams know all!
Gotta love them.
OMG! How cute is Matt? That was adorable.
:P
Little geek.

Awesome update, mah lovely. More soon, yes?! Yes. Good.
I love this

xxx

you're insanely right about the kerrang awards =/
haha, i love this!
aled's such a slut xP
and again, i shall subscribe x]

susie x

What??

Bullet so totally deserved to win. Seriously, they rock =P
(And they also have more hotness then Lostprophets. See, LPS only have Ian being hot, BFMV have Matt AND Jay. So nyahhh)
Hey, if anyone should have won though, it should have been Muse. Muse Muse Muse Muse Muse!!!!

But anyway, uh... story rocks =D And I love Aled xD

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
UPDATE!
xx

awww poor sean
LOL at aled. gotta love a bit of that
and AWW at matt XD

i BLATES agree.
bfma suck.
lps are well cooler.
and better
and have better hair / tattoo's
XD
xxx

moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore

and in case you didnt get the message yet

MORE SOON!

hehehe
i love it!!!
xxxx

i love this.
I love that i'm mentioned :P

Your so amaziningly amazing at writing..
LoveYou x

i like this story- it v cute
i think aleds my favourite character at the mo. because he reminds me of my friend at school.

oh and how dare bullet steal lostprophets hatrick in the kerrang! awards?
i thought LPS were gunna be winners of best british band for the third year but nooooooo people had to vote for bullet.
sucks major monkey ass

Great opening sentence, with Sean chewing on his jumper. Makes the character seem more human :cute:

The line about Aled going to buy shoes made me giggle :XD And ooh, he's a bit of a player! :tehe:

And this line was great too: are they both blind or just desperate?

It's also really nice that Sean's talking to Aled and Matthew about Ian, makes the three of them seem like good friends in the way that they're discussing it quite sensitively.

And I just read the AN at the bottom.

*turns into the hulk*

WTF? Like, I was annoyed when Lacuna Coil were announced as the support for their tour (they're much better and famous :XD) but this just makes me more annoyed!

FUCK YEAH!
Page claim.
I name it "Lostprophets"
Cos they so should have won Best British Band.

YAY! You updated. ily.
Haha, bless Matthew and his little geekiness, i love it :P
Pfft, Aled really is a whore. A big one.
But in an awesome way.
Do you think he'd swap Hayley and Cassie for a pair of large, silver, sparkly shoes that grew with his feet and never ever got dirty or wrecked and matched every outfit??
I do.

Anyway! Sean!
The poor thing. He's gonna be so crushed when Ian does go.
*Wells up at the thought of it*

Update this soon, yus? :D

xxx

*happy face*

I well smiled when I saw this was updated :)

This story really interests me - I love how you've written Sean's character. It's a good mix, because he can be really funny (So I just grinned when she asked me and said “Pornstar, miss.”) and also quite sad (I don’t hate Sean Smith, but I’m not a huge fan of him either.)

I also found it really ironic that Sean didn't have anybody to "hang out with". It makes him seem even more alone in his situation.

You know this already (:P) but i've decided i own Aled.
He's so damn adorable, even if he is a little pisshead.
:(
Seaaaaan! Don't be so self deprecating. Though, i guess thats the point of the story.
I think...that Sean and Ian should do some 'celebrating' soon.
:file: Just saying and all.
I love how you've made the characters, they fit really well, as indivudals and together and are really believeable.
Well done.

xxx

aw sean
Ian should be better at realising when his boyfriend is down
nods*
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aww.
it's so cute, but Ian's leaving poor Sean.
you're so good. =]

:mrgreen:

Thanks, everyone. I'm updating whenever I can. Holidays soon so they should be more frequent.