He Can Only Hope - Comments

  • justgivemecoffee

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    All I can say right now is more please? <3
    August 23rd, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • skeletonletters.

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    Ugh, this story isn't finished.
    Seriously.
    I just like have you saved as my favorite author so I can read this over and over and over and pleaaase.
    I'll fucking update it if you won't, but this poor little thing is just suffering out here in the cold, deal Mibba underworld.
    ):
    April 4th, 2011 at 04:21am
  • kt-Scissorhands

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    i don't guess you'll ever be updating then?.....too bad i really liked this story...Sad
    July 1st, 2009 at 06:16am
  • lirix

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    I have found that I am apparently addicted to all of your stories. *subscribes* (again) XD
    June 12th, 2009 at 03:48am
  • Sniffing Sharpies.

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    This is beautiful; great.
    You wrote it so well, and I just love Frankie's character and attitude in this.
    Update sometime soon?
    (It's not finished, is it? O_O)
    May 28th, 2009 at 05:08am
  • Pie.

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    Please, please, please write a sequel to this! You know, in the future and Frank and Gerard both have jobs (or maybe not and they're both hobos), and they meet one way or another and finally get together after all those years apart. It would be so fabulous. Oh my god I want it so bad I might wee myself.

    One other thing, how do you comment on your profile? I wanted to comment you back after you left one for me saying thank-you for commenting on one of your other stories. I though it was really cool that you made the effort to say thanks.

    You're a great writer, probably my favorite on here. Keep it up!
    xx
    March 2nd, 2009 at 01:27pm
  • joonie.

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    I must say that this is amazing. The way you use second person is brilliant. Everything is described so well. Frank is the cutest thing ever. It was just written crazily well. I don't know what else to say. I loved it, very much so. When everyone said that you were going to win it, I bet you didn't know that you would win. I loveee this.
    February 19th, 2009 at 03:45am
  • XoAwWwSuGaRoX

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    Wow, this is such a beautiful story, you have an amazing way with words (:
    - I love it;
    x
    January 31st, 2009 at 09:12am
  • Alice Verney

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    this is amazing so far
    January 30th, 2009 at 10:50pm
  • The Majority

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    Oh god.
    That has to be the most beautiful thing I've ever read.
    It made me cry.
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    Oh My Gosh I Know!!!!!!! I Started Reading This Ages Ago, But I Forgot To Subscribe

    This Is Soooo Beautiful!!!!!!
    January 12th, 2009 at 12:10pm
  • greenpenguins

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    Oh god.
    That has to be the most beautiful thing I've ever read.
    It made me cry.
    =[
    January 7th, 2009 at 12:35am
  • paper bag.

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    Cry

    I don't cry often with stories, but this, this is an exception. It's beautiful it really is, in that subtle unforced way which takes a special kind of skill to write.

    The choice of point of view is ridiculously effective, it couldn't of worked any better in my opinion. It's not often that you see stories written in this sense, but you carried it off effortlessly, well done.

    I think i fell in love with frank as a character, he's so endearingly positive and partly delusional that your can't help but have your heart go out to him, oh and the part when he'd smiling because he assumes Gerard's saying good things about him when he's really just trashing him along with the crowd..thats just heartbreaking.

    I really do like how endlessly he's in love with Gerard, you take his affection, his obsession, to extremes. Yet it doesn't come across as creepy, just sweet in a way and I like that. It would of seemed wrong if Frank came across as some kind of stalker.

    And I love the whole premise of the green hoody, it's bloody adorable. Plus it kinda highlights just how attached Frank is. It's lovely.

    So Basically I'm completely in love with your story and I'm going to toddle off and read some more of your work now because oh my god this was amazing, and heartfelt and ridiculously well written. You really know how to play with the readers emotions. It's a gift. Well done.

    P.S . The fact he makes a birthday card from Gerard to himself, made me a weeping emotional cripple for a few moments back there. :tehe: that was so terribly sad and sweet
    December 30th, 2008 at 01:46pm
  • Unapologetic Apathy

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    Update Spoon???
    December 11th, 2008 at 06:01pm
  • painterr

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    This isn't finnished, is it?
    Because this is my favourite story on Mibba, and if it ends so soon i'll cry. I miss this, really. I just love it, and I'd love if you just thought about updating. That would mean the world to me. *hint hint*

    And page claim, lets call it Robert. Dance
    October 27th, 2008 at 09:04pm
  • Anti-Social

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    I'm a new reader and all I can say is; you literally made me cry.
    I felt like screaming when they weren't going over to each other in the end.
    I was so upset when I realized there was only three chapters.
    Love this story- and I'm dieing for more! Please, at least think about updating!
    October 11th, 2008 at 02:11pm
  • Gee'slilsis

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    Last update: Chapter 3 on July 27th, 2008

    Are you trying to make me cry?!?!
    I've waited forever for an update!!!
    Is this finished?!?!
    Cuz it's truly exallent and amazingly written and I'm just DIEING for more!!
    Please Please Please update soon!!!!
    I'll love you for fourEVER!!!!
    PLEASE!!!!
    September 24th, 2008 at 09:37pm
  • shine like millions.

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    I've just finished reading this, and I'm sobbing. ):
    This story is so heartbreakingly beautiful, the way you write is absolutely astounding.
    I honestly hope you continue this story because it's probably one of the best here on Mibba.
    September 23rd, 2008 at 12:50am
  • newjerseyatemywallet

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    I feel like frank (story frank)
    all I am doing is hoping hoping hoping
    that you will continue this
    although my hoping if rather more desperate.
    this story is beautiful and so so meaningful I Love it
    & love you for writing it! :)
    August 25th, 2008 at 06:27pm
  • jon walker

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    ahem.
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    hayy.. i think you need to update this very soon.

    cause this story is pretty much amazing, and i need more of it.
    :D
    xx
    August 15th, 2008 at 02:49am
  • Hundefot.

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    :( :( :( :(
    August 14th, 2008 at 11:02pm