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  • allison wonderland

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    I like this story :D
    It totally made my day worth it already
    and it is 6:08 AM
    September 3rd, 2008 at 03:08pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Ah! What if it was a faulty test?!
    What if it turns out she was preggars but Kyle doesn't believe it's his because she was gone s long?!
    What if- what if she's really pregnant but Kyle moved onto another girl?!

    Now that would suck big time.
    September 1st, 2008 at 10:24pm
  • thnksfrthmmrs23

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    i really like this story
    September 1st, 2008 at 06:36am
  • SatanIsASkank

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    Wow I officially HATE London.
    September 1st, 2008 at 04:48am
  • SatanIsASkank

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    Wow I officially HATE London.
    September 1st, 2008 at 04:47am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    That was a quick get-over session.
    I have to say, the plot is really good but the story's pace is getting ahead of itself.
    Otherwise, I really do like this story.
    August 31st, 2008 at 12:50am
  • juliet.marie

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    great update! :]
    August 29th, 2008 at 09:05pm
  • eatmewhileimhot!

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    i love this :]
    update soooon?
    August 29th, 2008 at 08:48am
  • juliet.marie

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    awww that was so sad! :(
    August 28th, 2008 at 09:40pm
  • catastrophe.

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    I just started reading this story and I love it. And I agree with the girl above me.
    August 28th, 2008 at 06:47pm
  • allison wonderland

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    So for the first seven chapters I was giggling.
    I read the last one and I start crying.
    :]
    August 28th, 2008 at 08:59am
  • juliet.marie

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    please update soon! :]
    August 15th, 2008 at 04:43am
  • plastic hearts

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    This story makes me smile. I love reading a good love story. I can't wait for more.
    August 8th, 2008 at 06:19am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Yes! They might not break up.
    I love happy couples.
    July 27th, 2008 at 10:55pm
  • juliet.marie

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    amazing!!! :]]]]
    July 27th, 2008 at 11:38am
  • diedarlingdie

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    omg this has so little comments!!
    and i love it
    i swear i do
    its a great story :)
    July 27th, 2008 at 08:37am
  • SatanIsASkank

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    Agh.
    I absolutely love it.
    What ever you do, DO NOT STOP WRITING THIS STORY.
    I'm addicted. :]
    July 12th, 2008 at 08:15pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    I'm really glad you put in Kyle's point of view.

    When he said it wasn't just about the sex, it let us readers into his head a bit more so we know that's not ll he wants out of their relationship.
    Good job.
    July 12th, 2008 at 12:13pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    I wonder how she feels about Kyle wanting so much intimancy?

    This story is really creatively [yet a hint of good cliche in it] done.
    Great update!
    July 10th, 2008 at 07:35am
  • fireflies

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    I love it =]
    Cant wait for the next update
    July 7th, 2008 at 09:37pm