He Stood - Comments

Your summary had me a little skeptical, but damn was that well-written.
Interesting premise.
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And yes, you need to capitalize your titles.
Mibba is changing and anything and everything wrong with our stories may get them deleted.

i just reread it.. haha, it's really good =)

you need to put the story title and chapter title with capital letters at tyhe beginning of the words though, so it's 'He Stood.

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that's pretty good
Kinda reminds me of Darren Shan's stuff... you like his books?