Yeah, I get what you mean,especially since we both write our parts in about 30 min. lol
July 3rd, 2008 at 02:50am
So far this is pretty good. :)
The transitions between the point of views is good.
Some of the story could use a little more elaboration, instead of just being bluntly said but nonetheless it's heading off in the right direction. Keep it up girls. :)