Watching the Stars - Comments

this was really good.
Now going to read the sequel.
:D

I hate you so much.
HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?!

YES, A SEQUAL INDEED.

Travis Clark is a very sexy ginger.

Now that we've got that out of the way..

" 'He kept murmuring to himself, 'Would you like to... no, no... I got these for you, would you...? Dance with me, Prince’s orders? I need a first dance and I pick you?' "

That is the cutest thing everrrrrr. I think I would pretty much die if i knew a boy was stuttering about me like that. (BTW, NICK JON-ASS U R A DIQ.)

"She couldn’t resist his chocolate eyes.."

Mmm, chocolate. Like the brownie I'm eating. And the milk I'm drinking..

"They both blushed and turned away at the same time."

Awwwwwww.

"You can almost touch them."

Hehehehehehehehehehehehe.

SEXY CAN EYE
..

" 'No, no,' Caspian chuckled, regaining his composure. He burst out into laughter again. 'That was funny!' "

HAHAHA, DRUNK PEOPLE.

"Estella was quick to jump up.."

Holy shit, when i went to bayshore, I was sitting at a table waiting for Jess when she ordered her food, and i was watching a fly crawling around on the table, and then all of a sudden it flew at me and i jump/squeaked and got a few weird looks. That just reminded me of that sentence. Anyway..

FELIX!?#?@$?%#
..is he a ginger?

" 'Exactly! You are not like them, because you don’t stop talking,' Felix folded his arms. 'You should be taught discipline, shut up like the other girls!' "

I'm gonna slap that ginger.
HE CAN BE A SPANISH GINGER.

"Both Estella and Felix turned to see who was coming, the horse trots coming closer. Caspian appeared, dressed fully in mail and armor. In his eyes, there was an air of authority."

SEXY.

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"smiling with a bucket in hand. "

OMGAH SHE STOLE MAH BUCKET.

"Estella groaned, and stomped back into her house. Making more friends was harder than she expected."

That's what you geeeeet.
WHEN YOU LET YOUR HEART WIIIIN.

"That night, Caspian could not look at the stars."

Wow. This shows how ~*~sad he is. :(

"So, Estella decided. She needed to find a husband."

NONONO.
SHE ALREADY FOUND ONE BUT HE IS BEING STUPID.

"and there were no clouds in the sky to drench the soil with shadows."

I like that, a lot.

"She just did not feel. "

-looks away and puts palm in front of face-
DO YOU FEEL?@!?$??!

"He was speechless. If he had thought that she looked attractive before, dresses dirty and soiled and her hair dry from the sun, then now he thought she looked... There were no other words to describe it. For once, for the first time, the prince was at a loss of words."

oicu gettin hard

WHAT!#?
WHY WOULD SHE LEAVE?

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There are no quotes for this; but I am really really angered at Felix right now.

"Felix had mentioned kids..."

-sings kids-
BOOP BOOP BOOP BOOP BOO DUH DOO BOO BOOOOOOOOP.
-plays-
now you know why I stopped 'Breakt Out! Break Out!' for it.
harhar.

" 'Let’s have him killed!' "

IAWTFC.

"The doctor replied with a small, 'Nothing', and that was the end of that conversation."

That's right, bitches. Don't mess with Caspian.

"Flowers only made her think of Caspian."

THEY WERE MAAAAAAADE FOR EACH OTHERR.

-sneezes-

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I'LL NEVER LET YOU GO, DON'T EVER FORGET.

"The thought of having kids with Felix disgusted her."

Good. dnw to have ginger/spanish bbz.

"It would make me feel better if you chose me"

Awwww.

I hate you.
I have nothing else to say about this chapter.
I have nothing else to say about anything, at all.

AHHH.
i loved it!
friggen caspian needs to open his mouth.
he loves her so much!

YAY!!!! OMG I LOVE IT!!!!
but i gotta say: SHE HAS TO MARRY CASPIAN!!!!!
AAHHH!!!
lol keep writing :D

NOOO.
she is to marry caspian!
noww!

no!
no!
that's not supposed to happen.
caspian isn't supposed to stop associating with her!
grrr!

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Dance with me, Prince’s orders? I need a first dance and I pick you?”

lmfao i laughed to the max at that one.

caspian's so cute with estella!

This stories on of my favourites on mibba!<3

Haha, thank youuu! xD

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand i'm illiterate.

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Dance with me, Prince’s orders? I need a first dance and I pick you?”

lmfao i laughed to the max at that one.

caspian's so cute with estella!

This stories on of my favourites on mibba!<3

Love it!! LOVE IT!!! lol, XD
Keep writing!!!

Jessica; skeet skeet:

BANG BANG SHOOT EM UP YEAH

anyways
this was really good
i liked it because it sounded like i picked up a book and read it..
cause there were words..
and it was so interesting
my favourite part was when Caspian wiped his mouth with a napkin.
my least favourite part is when i killed your fish.
anyway, keep writing because i like this cause the senteces put together were so mesmerizing against that starry background...

Thanks for reminding me that you are a murderer and I will forever hold this upon you and your future kids. :(

But thanks for the comment.

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anyways
this was really good
i liked it because it sounded like i picked up a book and read it..
cause there were words..
and it was so interesting
my favourite part was when Caspian wiped his mouth with a napkin.
my least favourite part is when i killed your fish.
anyway, keep writing because i like this cause the senteces put together were so mesmerizing against that starry background...

Holy chipotle i love little caspian haha

i just have an image in my head and he's such a little cutie =]

I don't know why no one is commenting except for me.

their loss.

I really, really, truly, madly, deeply...can't wait to read more ! =]

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umm, and you were worried about writing a narnia story...why?

Geez that sounds so good so far! You crazy slugger, you! I can't wait to read more, darling!!

Hahaha, thank you! :mrgreen:

umm, and you were worried about writing a narnia story...why?

Geez that sounds so good so far! You crazy slugger, you! I can't wait to read more, darling!!