i like this one :] just keep in mind you've got to stay true to draco's character. i don't know how many times i've seen fanfics totally mutilate him :\
i especially love ch 4 wen she blakcs out, i think he is gunna feel guilty and then oohhh laaaalaaaaa sum sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol sorry bout tht but i luv da storii keep it up