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  • AJ9

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    Just finished this. I really enjoyed it.
    August 5th, 2019 at 10:46pm
  • SelfishFiction

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    @ zoey anderson
    I know, I wouldn't either. I wouldn't take back any guy who cheated. But yeah, it was just an old short dramatic story I wrote when that kind of stuff was interesting to me, haha. Thanks for reading it :)
    Personally I'm a Syn or Shads kind of girl though :)
    November 15th, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • zoey6661foREVer

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    If i was ava i wouldnt take zacky's sorry ass back. I go to jimmy. Since he's the sexiest in the band ya know. ANYWHO i thought it was 'ok'. I stopped reading it after this chapter when she took him bak.

    -foREVer<3
    October 14th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • efflorescxnt

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    ava made the right choice:D im sad it ended though D:
    July 10th, 2010 at 11:21am
  • nonegativity;

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    Ava is clearly an idiot.
    Don't get me wrong, I loved the story;;
    But Zacky screwed her over so many times, and she just took him back.
    Oi, ending was good.
    I was mad, but I enjoyed the story <3
    July 8th, 2010 at 10:47pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    oohmyygodd!??? this is soo good!
    May 24th, 2010 at 05:52am
  • MandieeVengeance

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    Continue!!!!
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • efflorescxnt

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    holyyy shit! ava sounded so hot and i just knew that zacky was gonna love it as soon as you finished describing her outfit! great job! and i cant WAIT to see what happens in the next one! he just BLURTED that out! lmao!
    February 13th, 2010 at 06:37am
  • lola4aday

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    if they do work it out i think it should be trhough a period of time i mean if someone did that to me i wouldn't want to see them for a long time.
    August 13th, 2009 at 06:09am
  • Kissing.Sin

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    Aww they need to work it out
    I mean, yeah he may have been an ass for doing it for 6 years but he's realised and he's willing to commit
    Well...willing to a degree :/
    He at least felt guilty about the waitress
    August 7th, 2009 at 07:12pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    i think they should work it out! ;] i HATE sad endings! moore cuz i LURVE this story!!!!!
    August 7th, 2009 at 07:04pm
  • xX.tragedy.n.love.Xx

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    i loved this story. its really really good. keep writing :]]
    August 7th, 2009 at 05:43pm
  • Pseudoheart

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    Ahahahhahahahahhaa i like this one ! You should update more often !
    July 28th, 2009 at 05:14am
  • Diamondintheroughxx

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    wow im so glad you updates again
    please continue with the story its really good :)
    April 28th, 2009 at 07:54pm
  • livingcold

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    I loved it!!! You should make a sequel!

    I laughed my ass off when Zack was like "Damn that whale can fuckin' dance."
    November 30th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • samiikitty

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    Teehee, great story. [=
    No really, I mean it =D
    July 28th, 2008 at 06:53am
  • Kill The Batman

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    great story!
    July 26th, 2008 at 08:22pm
  • rocketqueen6661

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    ooohh zacky better admit to what he's done!!
    July 4th, 2008 at 04:48pm
  • bloodravyn

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    zacky is such a jerk!!
    *subscribes*
    July 3rd, 2008 at 10:47am
  • rocketqueen6661

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    woah that was hot! =D
    cant wait to read more
    July 3rd, 2008 at 06:40am
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