Ok so just a little contingency error in this chapter. If Alex is supposed to be 20 in this story then it would have taken place circa 2008/09. So even though iPhones were around then they didn't have angry birds yet. I know it's such a tiny detail and I don't want to be THAT person, but I just thought I'd point it out. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the chapter.
June 17th, 2013 at 11:40pm