Your story is very good, this is kinda a late comment but...This story is a lot like the movie How to Deal based off of a Sarah Desson book. With the character Macon, and the arguing parents, the father announcing marring a new women...The dinner where Katie shows up, Macon not wanting to talk to Nick... Like Halley not really wanting to talk to Macon(in the movie)... Oh! The sister having sex with her boyfriend and such when she promised to wait. This story is good but a little unoriginal. I'm just throwing out constructive criticism. Their are too many similarities which makes me believe you wrote this story based off of reading or watching the book/movie That's fine and I don't necessarily think it's plagiarism but I would say be more careful.
April 9th, 2010 at 12:55am