This is simply amazing. Every word of it, from beginning to end, has me emotionally captured. I knew from when you had to go home that something would happen. It was just waiting for me in your words. I can't believe how emotional I got after reading this. I felt like crying as I neared the end, especially when she was dead. This is just an amazing story.
I had been on writers block, litterally for months and months before writing this.. and it just... all of it came to me.. =]