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  • Al Rosewater

    Al Rosewater (100)

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    O_O
    I like it.
    It sorta reminded me of a videogame I'm playing.
    August 26th, 2008 at 01:18am
  • Ville Valo

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    I really liked this, I liked how it had some mysterious feel to it and how they didn't know how they got in there.

    You should check your grammer, spelling and dialogue though.
    That is the only critism I can give this story.

    Short, but sweet.
    August 24th, 2008 at 09:01pm
  • N E C R O F I L I A

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    lol

    I liked it alot ^^

    I do have some con crit though, be sure to check your grammar and spelling ^&^

    But other than that, I htought it was nice, not comment and read my stuff! lol
    July 3rd, 2008 at 06:59pm
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