A genetic design for dying - Comments

I like the story. It has a great plot and it's very original and I haven't read anything like it before.

Although I did feel like I was reading it too fast, if you get my drift. It was just big blocks of writing and when you typed the dialogue you didn't go onto a new line and then go onto a new line after the dialogue.
I also seen that when you made Skylar cough, you typed *cough*, which isn't what you should of done.

I still love this story but I'd like to see things in Skylar's point of view for a chapter or two, I think it would be insteresting to see how she really feels about her illness and Will.

Great story and I will continue to read as long as you update, love.

and you call me mean
you're already killing off hte main character

I love this!! come on write more!! :D:D
its wonderful!
keep going!!

:D I luv it, i luv it, i luv it! I kno that this is a good story cause i need to kno wut happenes next.! MORE CHAPTERS, lol=D Keep Writing!:) btw not just saying this to be nice. =) However, i would look at my punctuation and a little grammer in ur storry if i were u. Best of hopes. ;)