This is an amazing story. I read the first chapter, and I got completely sucked into it. The way you don't use names actually does make it better, easier to relate to. Please update soon?
yayayayyayayayay i lurve it but it's soooooooooooo saaaad *whimperwhimper* ohhhh epic battles with brick walls and mighty guitar burn heh heh heh heh sorry that has no way of being fit in ummmmmm no clue i am such an awful writer i gave up on my storie