wow it took me enough time to read this x__O sorry about so many delays and stuff through reading it, but at least i've finally finished. I'm sad that he was arrested =[ update soon
Well this definitely wasn't what I expected, I'll tell you that. But I completely enjoyed it!
1. I love how your chapters are so long. :mrgreen: It seems like nobody writes nice, long chapters anymore. 2. It's nice to see Adrienne as an actual person for once, without her being self-centered and arrogant, and without her being too lovesick to care for anyone else. 3. You spell "quiet" like "quite", which are two completely different words. I know, sometimes I misspell and forget when to use its and when to use it's, but you haven't once used "quiet". It's just a simple thing, really, nothing plot-altering, but I'm a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to spelling and I thought it should be said. :D
No rush in updating, but I'd love to hear about what happens next. Congratulations on a fantastic story so far!
this is really beautiful u got skill :( but its so sad its making me cry ad more to it like ONLY JOKING! i never was dizzy :P bahahahaha althou that would b kinda weird i must admit thou this is REALLY awesome you should publish it like a new book for teens or sumthing its really great xx jennifer
OMG! what happened! why are they arresting him?! Did Adie press charges for him grabing her at the cafe?! OMG! You've got to update soon! i must know! oh my god!!!! that was brilliant! I need the next chapter! PM me when you write more! I wanna know what happpens next!
awwww, it is so sad...and I'm usually the last person to say they should get back together, but i think this time, they should, because they love each other, and they misseach other, and it was an accedent, so they should get back together. PM me when there is more, :D
Truly amazing =]