Loving You Dead - Comments

The ending seriously made my eyes well up with tears. It's so sad because he killed the one person he loved but figured out he wasn't cheating. Loved the story though

This was nothing like I expected it to be. It's so dark, and I never would have thought that somebody would be able to write something so dark and sad. Just because, well, it's something that people would be afraid to write. However, you weren't too scared, and I think you did a great job.

So, I give you a high-five and a great big hug for such a magnificent work like this. You can't find anything on Mibba like it. It's a rape scene and a murder scene all in one scene. And the ending is too good to pass. I could think about something that the box might say, but I wasn't expected it to be their anniversary. It breaks my heart that Franky never got to have a nice celebration. Or Gerard, for that matter.

In a way, Gerard is the one who was hurt in this story. After all, he had thought that Frank was cheating on him. It wasn't the other way around. He seemed so broken, and it turned to anger. A really dark form of anger, but he was only angry because he thought that his love had turned his back on him. That would have made me mad.

Not mad enough to kill somebody, but still. I would be really mad.

"I’d be a liar if I said I didn’t like it." This makes him sound so twisted. I can see all of this happening in front of me. And I can see the anger in Gerard's eyes. It makes me feel sorry for Frank, and I can't help but feel attached to him. All the scenes are escalating into something larger, and I just wish that something could have stopped it.

But then there wouldn't be a story, would there?

This is a hard topic to write about, and I give you credits for writing it so well. If I could give you points for a good story, I would, hands down. No questions asked, I would give you a bunch. And I also give you props for making the knife the murder weapon. There are several stories on here that involve a gun or a more threatening weapon, because knives take longer. They take patience, in a way. So, good job with that!

Amazing story in general. Good job!

-cries, literally-

HOW COULD HE KILL HIM!

I hope all your stories aren't this depressing, coz I'm reading them all, one by one. XD

No! Now I need to stop pointlessly crying over a made up character.

But It's so sad.... ~

<3

This was very well-written. It was also extremely disturbing, but wow, yeah... that's some nice writing. The extra twist at the end was totally unexpected (for me, at least). :]

Whoa.
That was so dark and disturbing and beautiful.
Congratulations on winning! It was excellent. xD

:omfg:omfg:

I'm in utter shock, that was like the most amazing thing I have ever read.
It was so descriptive and filled with so much anger and images and I'm just in shock right now, I fucking loved it!! :cheese:
I cried at the end when I realized Frank had done nothing and I was so angry at Gerard for killing him, it was just so :cheese: and :twitch:
:arms: You are such an amazing writer, and you have so much talent and you should never ever let anybody tell you otherwise. :arms:

:hand: You're totally going to win, I don't know what you're talking about.
Mine is like total crap after reading this. :XD

My stomach actually went cold reading this.

To be honest, most of the way through I was thinking, wow, this is a bit sick and twisted (in a good way of course).
And the end just made me feel sick, and so so sorry for Gerard, Frank too obviously, but mainly Gerard, because he's just found out what he did was completely irrational.
He's just lost the love of his life because he so stupidly over-reacted, and now has to live with what he's done.

I'm still reeling. XD

That was sheer evil.
'Twas great, but I'm just a little petrified of you at the moment.
But, on the other hand, it did fit the topic well.
I loved the ending by the way.
The whole time I was thinking, "Frank was probably doing something completely Innocent. Gerard's just overreacting."
It would appear that I was right.
Either way, I enjoyed it!

Woah, I didn't think Frank had cheated but I didn't expect it to be that bad at the end. Poor Frankie. :( But then again, like Gerard, I would be lying if I said I didn't enjoy that.

Morgan? Queen of sadism??

HELLO?!

That was brilliant : )
And a totally unexpected ending!
The ending made me want to cry... and I don't know why. Well, I do. I felt bad : (
But brilliant!

damn didnt expect that

Ha! I knew Frank hadn't cheated!!

POOR FRANK - what an overused phrase but still, he loved Gerard, and look what he got in return!

Seriously, why didn't Frank point out the present before Gerard gagged him!!

Anywayz - brilliant!

Whoa. That was very well done if I do say so myself. Although it was quite gory and quite violent, it didn't seem perverse, if that makes sense. I think you wrote it quite beautifully, if such a thing can be described that way.

And that ending... just wow. I wasn't expecting that in the least. It was completely surprising and you just imagine how it impacted Gerard.
So, kudos to you on the incredibly sadistic, amazing one-shot and I will definitely be looking forward to any more you write. (:

Well done. You made me grin sadistically while I read this.

I love stories like these and the way you made Gerard almost justified and right about torturing and killing Frank was brillaint.

I could read the emotions well in the story, and relate to how hurt Gerard was about thinking Frank was cheating on him that it got the point of madness. He must have been really mad 'cause it definitely seemed to me as if he deluded himself into thinking Frank was cheating on him. I personally think Frank was pretty fucking pure before Gerard raped him. But that's the impression I built up and would like to belive in to make the story sound more intense to myself. Not that it wasn't already.

To be honest, I was very surprised when Gerard actually plunged the knife in. I seriously didn't expect him to do it, and especially not in such a rashful manner.

It was brillaint. I can't wait to read more one-shots by you. I like the way you think. :]

You...
You killed Frankie!
And he got him an anniversary present!
Jesus, Teddy, that was twisted.
I mush more like the first chapter better.
Far more smutty and evil *muahaha*

What's this about more?
Is that what that playlist thing is?

Yumm more fun stuff to drool over!!!

I loved it!

Seriously, this was amazing!

I wanna know what Frankles got Gee for their anniversary.

Gee regrets it now, I bet!

Update SPoon!

OMG nooooooooooooooooooooo

You know what?
I just started to read a book that reminds me of this.
It's called Romeo, and it's about this killer guy who like does a whole bunch of sexual things with the woman he kills before he kills them, like a bunch of sadomasochist things, then kills them, fucks them, and cuts out their hearts for the keeping.
It's crazy creepy but I love it

Thought you'd like to know =]

Hehehe

SADIST COMING THROUGH!

love it and i just want to be the one there... either as frank or gee would be good. watching, even better.

Christ, sick fantasies *bangs head on desk*