Well, I first have to say, you are a fantastic author. That's always a plus, I love the way you put your sentences and whatnot, it helps the story move at a good pace. Which is kind of rare sometimes now, cause stories seemed kind of rushed and whatnot.
I also love that in between sentences you say Frank thinks things like "It made me better" Or "This will make me better". It's heart wrenching, but that's what it's there for, right?
This is a freard, right? If it is {I really hope} Then I can't wait until Gerard comes, it will make it even better than it already is.
And that's saying somethin :D.
Keep up the excellent work, and i'll give you updates on what I think, unless you don't want my thoughts.
It's not gonna make him better....
GERARD IS =D
..But Frank don't know that yet...
LET HIM KNOW THAT SOON PWEASE!!!
Update soon plz!!