Okay, so... I love this story to death. Like, it's my favourite story on Mibba, I'm sure. :] No offense to anyone. Sigh. Oh, how I wish your story was real. If there was a ghost in my room who looked like Brian...I would definitely not be freaking out. ...However, if there was a ghost in my room that looked like Zack. There's a good chance I'd die. :] But that's not the point!
Point is...aren't you glad I gave you death threats! :] I am! I should do that more often. Rotfl.
this is my favourite story in the whole entire world.
I can picture Brian saying the line: "“How hard is it to believe that the spirit of an attractive, hot and drop dead gorgeous - no pun intended - guy is in your room?” he pouted with a degree of casual curiosity." lmao.
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Oh...my...mother...of...fuck!!!
Leah! You cannot leave it this way! I know that's what Brian said (and Im still very upset he's already dead!) but why is he there? Why hasn't he....crossed? Omg! you can't do this to me! I have to know!
At one point I get start getting scared again - god Im such a whimp! lol Love it ma darlin!
Ugh! So Apparently I've missed a chapter >.< Sorry about that. I should probably check my email more often.
I really liked how you made the group visit a fortune teller--it tied in well with the story and now those predictions have me freaking out. Especially that Tower card. I love it when unexpected things happen, but until they do I always drive myself crazy trying to figure out the next event.
“Do you mind not sitting on me?”
:XD I don't know why, but I laughed so hard. That so totally sounds like something Brian would say.
I particularly enjoyd chapter eight, mostly because we get to see more of Brian, and even though not a lot has been revealed about him, it's nice to know he's not just wandering around all ghost-like and creepy.
“From now on, we both live here.”
Ooh! I wonder if that was supposed to be a threat. Though I don't really know how Brian could execute any sort of violence, since he's a ghost and all. Unless he's a ghost that can kill people. Which would be pretty damn awesome.
Jayden looked at his somewhat flirtatious expression and exclaimed loudly, “You’re not sharing my bed!”
“How do you know I haven’t already?” He smirked, tugging her covers back and motioning to the bed with his eyes.
Favorite. Line. Ever.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully finding out more about Brian/what happened to him. :D