Could You Look Me in the Face, Now? - Comments

  • prototype.

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    E-Erin, that was just amazing. I mean it, I so mean this. Cry

    I couldn't imagine this story in real life, it gave me shivers. shit.

    The story was really deep, and its dark emotions crept up to my mind and made me think of death. It was really scary, when Gerard thought of darkness to escape the bad faces of the world but, you were so right, he missed the numerous beautiful things on Earth.

    I almost cried when he held the gun, we was so wrong of doing that. Cry
    And again, the tension was so present that it obviously affected me.
    :cheese:

    I'm so glad Gerard somewhat knows that we are here for him, and for them in real life. This story just gave a good view of what will happen to them if we and their loved ones would not support them. Keep the Faith. :finger:

    Erin, your writing skills is just so so amazing. I loved this one- shot and I'll love it forever. You should do more than this, and make me cry. :file:
    July 19th, 2008 at 10:21am
  • Bassists Are Sexy

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    Whoa.
    July 12th, 2008 at 09:14am
  • GoAway

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    Ohh wow.
    The way you wrote it was so pretty. Everything in closure in such a way that makes it...sensible, yet leaving you wondering in awe.
    July 9th, 2008 at 09:31am
  • chrissie.

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    :omfg:

    Just...Cry
    July 7th, 2008 at 10:43am
  • Frankee

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    I love this. In Love

    It's beautiful. Cry
    July 7th, 2008 at 10:36am