I just have to say, the last few chapters... god, this story, the way you write, is amazing, B-E-A-UTIFUL. It feels like theropy reading this. You're an amazing writer, you not only describe emotions, but you get the reader to feel them. Fantastic, keep up with this story, and continue to write stories. You should seriously consider writing a novel when you're older, or now. Lol, which ever.
More when you can please, and that goes for your other story too, Hate Love and Sex Appeal. =D
I think its brilliantly written. Most storys on mibba have no meaning and are all about sex and kisses. They have no feeling.
I really like this story because of how you've described the feelings. And when adele said there was a guy looking over the women. I was like Oh my god! Its Bille Joe Armstrong.
Poor adele! She's going through tough times.
I find the relationship between adele and Frankie is beautiful. Its like one of those relationships which make you think. I so wish I had a guy like that. Or I wish my boyfriend or Girlfriend would be like that towards me.
Its really good And I am subscribing. You've got yourself a new reader! P.S Its really sad. I like sad storys. I like crying over things like this and then reading that its all going to get better soon.
whoa i missed like five chapters so basically i think i know who it is but i'm not really sure the chapters were really good!! that oreo thing was so cute! <3
AMAZING FUCKING STORY!! plz update soon.....PLEASE? lol the kissing tower part made me go "awwww" seriously. that takes awesome writing skills. which you possess. so yea...UPDATE.
when are you gonna update again?