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  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I adore this story.
    <3
    July 11th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • actress411

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    Vee I love the story! You always did have a passion for writing. You've gotten better as we've grown up though. :) Love you!<33333
    January 26th, 2011 at 10:06pm
  • second-hand smoke

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    I love this story so much! Once I started, I couldn't stop reading. Your characters seem so real and the subject matter just made it perfect for teenage readers. The dialogue was excellent, as was the pace of the story and the content of every single chapter. Your writing style is compelling and the story is original. I'm very impressed and I can't wait to read more. You should be very proud of this fine piece of work you have produced.
    December 22nd, 2010 at 12:54am
  • Vanima-Arwen

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    ok..i think the reason for your "Writers block" its because the story moved way too fast!

    I really like it but i think you can take advantage of the "hiatus" and edit some parts, make it to slow down.

    But that is just me:)

    I like the story anyways. It's original :)
    October 16th, 2009 at 07:55pm
  • Vanima-Arwen

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    going on chapter 4... really like it so far..:)
    October 16th, 2009 at 07:04pm
  • Vanima-Arwen

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    just ended chapter 1 and so far it looks good...i mean i want to keep reading so..:p
    October 16th, 2009 at 06:51pm
  • ignite this angel.

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    This is a really good, well written story.
    I agree with the person above me, you've really thought out the characters and they seem real - and really cute.

    But I will say I hope you update soon. I'm not telling you to, but it's good and I'm looking forward to more.
    September 2nd, 2009 at 04:59am
  • suchawomble

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    Very cool story. I won't say 'hope you update soon' because personally I think every author should update in their own time and not feel pressured by readers who are impatient.

    I will say though that you've thought through the characters really well and every sentences leaves me wanting more. Great writing!
    June 17th, 2009 at 06:23am
  • AshyResonate

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    hope u update soon, love ur banner btw
    June 16th, 2009 at 03:20am
  • Katycakes

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    I love thist story so much please please update soon?
    February 4th, 2009 at 08:54pm
  • amelie

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    I like this story.
    It leaves you wanting to know what happens next.
    :)
    January 30th, 2009 at 05:56am
  • solastyear

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    i love this story,
    i was scared you werent updating anymore but when you did it made me happy!
    XD
    January 30th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • xMARKSthespot

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    I'm telling you, Marie's saying Leah's room is out of bounds and then leaving would have made me want to go in there even more.
    ...But I'm just a liiittle nosy.
    XP
    January 29th, 2009 at 05:28am
  • solastyear

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    I LOVE IT :)
    December 5th, 2008 at 04:08am
  • YoursForever

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    You FINALLY updated. Good chapter.
    Update soon.
    December 1st, 2008 at 10:19pm
  • oh.wendigo

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    more please? =]
    November 24th, 2008 at 02:36pm
  • stephaniexoxo

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    this story is so cute,
    I really think you should add soon.
    : )
    November 19th, 2008 at 02:05pm
  • xMARKSthespot

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    Aww...I couldn't help but think that Alex is also a cutie pie in this chapter.
    ...Do I give in a little too easily?
    =)
    August 16th, 2008 at 05:31am
  • Beautifully Tainted

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    erm.. i dont know why i wrote 'hope' :/ Lol. sorry
    August 13th, 2008 at 07:09pm
  • Beautifully Tainted

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    Lol I do LIKE frank Iero :) haha... Awesome update hope btw =D~Hugs Mary
    August 13th, 2008 at 07:08pm
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