first off this story is awesome second it was beautiful third that last line was awesomely depressing fourth you are mean (not really) fifth the story was awesome
... omg, i am seriously crying right now. no. u know how people say they're crying when a story is really sad, but they really aren't crying? it was just a figure of speech? I'M NOT ONE OF THOSE POEPLE!!!! tears are seriously falling down my cheeks as of right now. im not even joking. why did she have to go???????? she can't die!!!!!!!!! oh, and the very last sentance of the last chapter broke my heart. 'I'll be waiting for tomorrow for the rest of my life' or something like that. it just made more tears come out of my eyes!!!!!!! that was a really great story. *starts clapping*
I think it could have gone for a little bit longer maybe delved into the relationship between Trace and Bella, and Bella and her cousins. But i loved it, it was awesome <3
I would usually start a comment off with a bug eyes smiley and a 'holy crap you made me cry!' for this type of situation but I feel like this story deserves more than that. It was beautiful. The way it was told and the way it was brought to life was just simply fantastic. Yeah, you made me tear up a bit which is amazing because you packed so much emotion into one last chapter. To seal off the fate of such an amazing tale. It was amazing, really.
oh man at first with the last chapter i was like, wait did she die? and then i read your note and i was like omg. so i reread it and the tears just started flowing. i cried so many times in this story, and laughed, and idk. it was amazing and i can't wait for more of your writings.
Omgee do you know how hard it has been to post this, my computer is so retarded!:roll: Any who, that was so cute! I loved all the updates! EVERY SINGLE ONE I MISSED! He's so cute! I can't believe he didn't take down the picture from the night they first kissed! Even when he was mad at her! *squee*:tehe: And yayyyy he finally believed her! Shecantdieshehastogivehimforever!:crazy: And ever and ever! Haha
second it was beautiful
third that last line was awesomely depressing
fourth you are mean (not really)
fifth the story was awesome