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  • XdarkblueX

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    first off this story is awesome
    second it was beautiful
    third that last line was awesomely depressing
    fourth you are mean (not really)
    fifth the story was awesome
    September 22nd, 2008 at 07:38pm
  • JonasGrl818

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    awww u made my cry but she had cancer so she had to die cause it would keep going and going.

    ps GREAT AUTHOR AND PLZ READ MY STORY
    THX!!!
    September 5th, 2008 at 11:35pm
  • bItTeRsWeEtNeSs

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    ... omg, i am seriously crying right now.
    no. u know how people say they're crying when a story is really sad, but they really aren't crying? it was just a figure of speech?
    I'M NOT ONE OF THOSE POEPLE!!!! tears are seriously falling down my cheeks as of right now. im not even joking.
    why did she have to go???????? she can't die!!!!!!!!!
    oh, and the very last sentance of the last chapter broke my heart. 'I'll be waiting for tomorrow for the rest of my life' or something like that. it just made more tears come out of my eyes!!!!!!!
    that was a really great story. *starts clapping*

    :)
    August 30th, 2008 at 05:14pm
  • Whisperer

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    I think it could have gone for a little bit longer
    maybe delved into the relationship between Trace and Bella, and Bella and her cousins.
    But i loved it, it was awesome <3
    August 30th, 2008 at 07:49am
  • xoxo_allykat_xoxo

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    that was horible, why did she have to die, they were so happy...i cried :(

    that was sad

    but i loved it and cant wait for another Joe storie
    August 29th, 2008 at 08:03pm
  • panicfan3-10

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    I would usually start a comment off with a bug eyes smiley and a 'holy crap you made me cry!' for this type of situation but I feel like this story deserves more than that. It was beautiful. The way it was told and the way it was brought to life was just simply fantastic.
    Yeah, you made me tear up a bit which is amazing because you packed so much emotion into one last chapter. To seal off the fate of such an amazing tale.
    It was amazing, really.
    August 29th, 2008 at 09:10am
  • ForeverEmily

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    oh man at first with the last chapter i was like, wait did she die?
    and then i read your note and i was like omg.
    so i reread it and the tears just started flowing.
    i cried so many times in this story, and laughed, and idk. it was amazing and i can't wait for more of your writings.
    August 29th, 2008 at 06:35am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    wow that story was amazing!
    August 29th, 2008 at 05:56am
  • allygator18

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    wow, that was such a sad ending. that was like..powerful. nice story!
    August 29th, 2008 at 05:31am
  • holysmokes

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    ohmygod. i'm crying. like legit tears. ]=
    that story was absolutely amazing. it really was. even with the sad ending, it was still amazing.
    August 29th, 2008 at 05:17am
  • Polaroids;

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    Oh. *sniffs* my God! *sniffs* Cry
    Even though is a sad ending... I loved it! :)
    August 29th, 2008 at 04:08am
  • holysmokes

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    aww i was so happy when she woke up!
    ]= its almost over? i'm gonna miss it
    August 29th, 2008 at 12:09am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    this story is amazing!
    August 28th, 2008 at 02:05am
  • bItTeRsWeEtNeSs

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    awwwwww.... i liked that chapter. it was really cute!!
    please update soon!!

    :)
    August 26th, 2008 at 12:23am
  • panicfan3-10

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    this is soooo amazing!
    I'm afraid for the ending though lol.
    August 25th, 2008 at 09:02pm
  • Tanyaxox

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    love it , cant wait for the next chapter :)
    August 25th, 2008 at 01:19am
  • Polaroids;

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    I really, really,really like this story! I read all chapters just now and they had me on the verge of tears!

    UPDATE SOON!
    August 22nd, 2008 at 01:24am
  • allygator18

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    love your story =)
    August 22nd, 2008 at 01:18am
  • The.Write.Way

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    Omgee do you know how hard it has been to post this, my computer is so retarded!:roll:
    Any who, that was so cute!
    I loved all the updates! In Love
    EVERY SINGLE ONE I MISSED!
    He's so cute!
    I can't believe he didn't take down the picture from the night they first kissed!
    Even when he was mad at her!
    *squee*:tehe:
    And yayyyy he finally believed her!
    Shecantdieshehastogivehimforever!:crazy:
    And ever and ever!
    Smiley
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    I love this story!
    Update please please please

    :arms:Sensibly S.anne
    August 21st, 2008 at 06:08am
  • bItTeRsWeEtNeSs

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    aww... omg i loved that chapter!!!!! it was so cute!!!!
    more soon

    :)
    August 19th, 2008 at 04:18pm