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  • Georgia Furse.

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    DAAAAMN!!!
    This is good!
    Canna wait till the next part!
    I think I'll scream or something!
    EEEEEE!!!
    ^_^

    Was brilliant.
    August 26th, 2008 at 10:39pm
  • Sick of Feeling Sick

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    Oh.My.God! Tom!! No!!

    Sorry it took me so long, I didn't have the stomach to read it when I got the e-mail. lol. Amazing! Josh has lost his marbles. Officially. Holy shit.

    What's gonna happen now? I'd like to kno-ow. = ]
    August 14th, 2008 at 05:49am
  • CarmillaPoisonberry

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    if you kill tom in the next chapter, kill josh next(i don't have anything against. in the story, his mind's cracked completely).
    August 14th, 2008 at 04:39am
  • Trip Fontaine.

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

    Okay I know I already commented this...and a fucking massive and hysterical comment it was, too...but I just had to say this:

    TOM'S EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    JOSHUA TOUCHING TOM'S FACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    JOSHUA SAYING "THEY'RE SO WONDROUSLY WIDE"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *bawls*

    Seriously, can I take writing classes from you?

    ...or, if not, just lessons on how to bee cool?
    August 14th, 2008 at 02:47am
  • CarmillaPoisonberry

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    you already killed rhys. :'(
    PLEASE DON'T KILL TOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 12th, 2008 at 06:49am
  • Trip Fontaine.

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    YOU'VE KILLED ME!

    If Tom must die, I'll die too!

    *slaps face*

    Ah, enough of that.

    Well OF COURSE I thought Josh had the gun! But...I'm confused. Whose pockets were the bullets in?

    And...

    ASDFLKSJGLIFHGHRO!!!!

    FUCKING JOSHUA!!!!!

    What a perveeeeeeeeeeeee!

    Aaaah! No! Tom's eyes! So beautiful!

    Seriously does Joshua have mental problems, or is he just diabolical? Please let it be the first......

    I have a feeling Joshua is going to be the one to come out alive.

    I DON'T WANT ANY MORE DEATH!!

    But then, I suppose it's inevitable.

    FUCKING AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!

    Please excuse my never-ending comment. I will leave now :)
    August 12th, 2008 at 04:01am
  • evgeni malkin.

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    Faris replied, confused and as tense as a nun in a whorehouse
    I absolutely loved that line. And the last bit about Bambi's mom. You are excellent writer.
    For a second I thought they were going to play Russian Roulette.
    August 8th, 2008 at 07:53pm
  • Pins-and-needles

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    oh my gawd!!!!!!!!!!!! no way!! I knew josh never had the gun but I thought he had the dagger, I love the way you've made him crazy! I also like the "what do you say Faz? Wink murder?" I love the sinister child games, sends delight running through my body. O.o it also reminds me alot of toby, you should ask him to read a little bit of CH5, its mad.

    Me thinks you should write some more.

    xoxoxoox
    August 8th, 2008 at 03:43am
  • Zayla Starr

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    You've sent me through emotional turmoil reading this... upset, anger, and now sickness... oh, and lust for crazy Joshua. q; He may be scary, he may be sickand twisted, but he's also damn hot. Am I mad??

    I also want to cry for Tom ): and Everyone else,actually... Poor joseph... ):

    Ok enough of the sad faces. Me loves this and demandsthat you write more, now!! OK maybe not, that's mean... Especially since you wrote this /: (I jokes I loves you really)... I'll just ask very nicely and make innocent faces until you write more...

    Pwease??

    *eskimo kiss*

    xxxxx
    August 7th, 2008 at 03:15pm
  • i defy you stars.

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    Rightio, I love this, the part about the eyes was by far my favourite part.
    I THINK I'VE GOT A SOLUTION!
    They could have just got Rhys' body and carried him through all bthe rooms because there has to be a dead guy :D
    See, im smart.
    xo
    August 7th, 2008 at 11:52am
  • TeaCakeLady

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    AHH.
    it' so addictingly gruesome, i love it.
    moaaaar? (:
    xo
    August 7th, 2008 at 08:29am
  • Vicious Tyrant

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    NO! NOT TOM! Oh man, Rhys sounded so innocent! Why did you have to go Rhys?! Gawd, can't you just kill off Joshua? He's so...creepy, but I guess its like one of those denial things.

    This is so addicting I'm recommending it to my friends! Please make more soon!
    August 7th, 2008 at 12:10am
  • Georgia Furse.

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    It's SAW!!
    "You wanna play a game!!"
    Sad they chose Rock, Paper, Scissors.

    Really good, more when you can PLEASE ^_^
    July 17th, 2008 at 05:06pm
  • Freaka.

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    What da- what da- WHYYYYYY??????????????
    WHY RHYS?????????
    July 15th, 2008 at 11:16am
  • evgeni malkin.

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    It is sad that Rhys had to die but that was an amazing chapter.
    I friggin' love your story.
    July 15th, 2008 at 08:43am
  • Trip Fontaine.

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    Rhys is dead! Life is not worth living!!!!

    *slaps Joshua*

    Seriously if I was them I would all die together.

    *bawls*

    But...

    MORE! lol.
    July 15th, 2008 at 05:06am
  • TeaCakeLady

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    -shudders-
    this is amazing.
    :l not rhys! :[

    XO
    July 14th, 2008 at 12:11am
  • i defy you stars.

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    Well... that was rude.
    god. you just... killed rhys.
    xo
    July 13th, 2008 at 11:41pm
  • Zayla Starr

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    Ok i'm now shaking from reading this... joshua scares me.

    mooreee soooooon please (:
    July 13th, 2008 at 10:53pm
  • Sick of Feeling Sick

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    Gahh, this is amazing!!! Simply incredible!! And I don't care if I sound like a wimp but...I DON'T WANT ANYONE TO DIE!! = [

    Can't wait for me!!
    July 13th, 2008 at 02:02am
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