Sharlot and the Werewolf - Comments

thanks for all the input and love <3

OK I finished the story. Edmund is cool. Also, what a turn of events. How did Lance become annoying so quickly LOL I can tell that Sharlot is all about the moment, yet these guys get hooked so easily. She ignored Matt instantly after she wasn't in the mood to play with him and basically did the same with Lance. Hmm , I wonder when she will get tired of Edmund. I wonder what his fault will be. Lastly, I love all the new creatures that raided her house. :) On to the next Love!

OMGGGGG I Like slash Loathe THIS ONE MORE THAN "LOVE OF EARTH" I didn't think that could be possiblee. OKOK i left off on chapter 19 so I will try not to be too mad yet. OMFG I have too many thoughts so bare with me.
OKOK first, Sharlot. When the story started off I was soo confused. I was like wut the hell, is she dreaming shes a baby. And then, it made sense when the creatures came together. I loved Sharlot. I loved the vampire descriptions, and i loved how deeply she cared about Matt and Dolls love. BUT THENNN
OMGG I cant believe that she is such a shitty friend. Her and Matt could go kick rocks. Poor doll. Steffy that was some GREATT writing because I didnt NOT see that coming. You write soo well and the story is soo interesting. I KNOW its gonna explode on them eventually OR HMM maybe, Doll is not so innocent either (WAAA NAAA NAAA!! SUSPENSE)
Now Lance, I love his confidence, and I love the way that he is too smart for Sharlot. The fact that he knew she was sneaky and still stayed shows how much he wanted to be with her. Hes my fave character right now for the guy roles. M\ATT, him and is incubus self. All demonic and using sexy phermones lol. Soo mean to DOLL . Its weird. its like they both care for Doll deeply, but Matt, deep in his heart, would have perferred Sharlot. I think he would leave Doll at any minute for Charlotte. I wish he loved Doll alittle more.
WELL ANYWHOO, love the story. Keep writing because I will read ALL of it and comment on ALL of it at each major point.
ps. This one should REALLY be published !!!

XD thank you

Wow! This story is amazing! I can not believe this is your first comment!!!