An Apple for Erik - Comments

Love it!! Update soon?

Please write more?!?!?!? I mean its almost thanksgiving 2011 but I love the story and really want to know where its going. Please????????? <3

please continuez!!!!

you sould coutinue the storie it is relly good. :D

You should keep writing this! I absolutely love it!

I do have two bits of constructive criticism though, if you don't mind...
Twice you wrote 'threw' instead of 'through' and when writing in first-person narrative you don't need quotation marks.

Sorry if this wasn't what you were looking for when you said you wanted feedback... I really do love the story!

I love it! keep writting!

i like deee story u keep writing kay?

i like it-- post more please???
:twisted: -sarah and macphisto

loveee it.