An Apple for Erik - Comments

ek.is.leif.vir.jou (100)

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Love it!! Update soon?

November 5th, 2012 at 07:42am

ReapersPet4908 (100)

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Please write more?!?!?!? I mean its almost thanksgiving 2011 but I love the story and really want to know where its going. Please????????? <3

August 20th, 2011 at 01:44am

BeautyXPhantom (100)

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please continuez!!!!

May 10th, 2009 at 07:47pm

Death the Kidd (100)

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you sould coutinue the storie it is relly good. :D

December 18th, 2008 at 08:39pm

FreakyChick (100)

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You should keep writing this! I absolutely love it!

I do have two bits of constructive criticism though, if you don't mind...
Twice you wrote 'threw' instead of 'through' and when writing in first-person narrative you don't need quotation marks.

Sorry if this wasn't what you were looking for when you said you wanted feedback... I really do love the story!

August 16th, 2008 at 10:21pm