Little Angel - Comments

You write really well, with details and stuff but i have to confess that stuff like this is not my favorite type of stories.
even though i for some reason felt bad for the young boy called Cat(?) i dont know why really:P

I usually don't read much pwp mostly because it bores me but I honestly really did enjoy this, but it's hard not to enjoy any pwp that involves Cat and Andy. x]

His hair was styled perfectly, falling into his face with careless elegance, hiding his doll-like features – prominent cheekbones; pale, flawless skin; big, blue and oh-so-innocently looking eyes; and his lips – Whiplasher loved Cat’s lips from the second he saw him for the first time – pouting, covered with the layer of shinny lip gloss and very inviting.

Usually when writers attempt to describe a character's appearance all at once it can break the story but the way you wrote it was wonderful. It created the perfect image without sounding like somebody just listing out features.

and Whiplasher noticed how Cat checked his image as soon as they entered the space

Obviously the way your write Cat and Andy are perfection, but it's little things like these that I really love and develops them well as characters and really shows their personalities to the people on here(and there are a lot) that have never heard of DS before but would be reading the story.

it was the older man, rather submissive in the position they were in, who had everything in control. He always had everything in control, especially with Cat – and the young boy always obeyed him.
To me, that line really gave the reader a great insight of their relationship.

The bj scene was nothing but hot. Andy's dominance through out and Cat's willing submissiveness were perfectly captured without it sounding like it was just thrown out there.

The only bit of crit that I have is that the lines

It didn't really help as Whiplasher now used his fingers to move Cat's head in the way he liked,

and

It didn't take too much time, though, and Whiplasher thrust into Cat's mouth few more times

Kind of broke the flow of the story for me but you picked the story back up well.

Great job, I loved the story and can't wait to read more from you. I hope my review wasn't to shitty, I'm bit droggy today. :XD

*finally replies*
oh, thank chu! ^-^
I didn't know this is your favourite. :O
Pssh, sweet is cutely sexy, slightly agressive and violent is fucking hot. RAWR. Um, I'm not making any sense. I'm feeeling veeeery lazy today. I might just not do anything... nuh, *goes to beta a certain fic* ^-^
love you too. <3

*squeals*

I love re-reading this, it's my favorite of all
you've been writing And that don't
say little :lol:

Cat looked up, his eyes wide and glistening from the tears that threatened to spill just seconds ago, shining the brightest shade of blue, the same shade that indicated Cat was really proud of something.
This have always been my favorite to imagine
It's so sweet to imagine that, even though the former
actions may not have been so sweet :wink: Though
extremly hot :yah

The cum was still on his lips and Whiplasher reached down, wiping some of it with his thumb.
- dies -
Cum on Kitten's lip may actually be one of the cutest
things ever :tehe:

Love you :arms: