I can't believe that this doesn't have more comments, it's absolutely brilliantly written. I love your characters. Her father especially-there's just something about him that makes me smile. They're very life-like and that's something that's really hard to bring about in your characters, I think. So well done on that. And your descriptions are flawless. I could see everything in my head as I read and I absolutely love when a story does that for me. I genuinely like the setup you have going so far, with the texting and the emails. It's an interesting twist and I'm absolutely hooked. You've got such amazing talent; please keep writing. I definitely cannot wait to see where you take this story and I know I'm not the only one. :) Ooh sorry I rambled quite a bit, haha.
I really do love this story. Like so much. And even though I think this is quite possible the slowest updated story I have on here, it's also one of the best written, so I ain't unsubscribing, and it's going in my "Best Mibba Stories."
I love your characters. Her father especially-there's just something about him that makes me smile. They're very life-like and that's something that's really hard to bring about in your characters, I think. So well done on that.
And your descriptions are flawless. I could see everything in my head as I read and I absolutely love when a story does that for me. I genuinely like the setup you have going so far, with the texting and the emails. It's an interesting twist and I'm absolutely hooked.
You've got such amazing talent; please keep writing. I definitely cannot wait to see where you take this story and I know I'm not the only one. :)
Ooh sorry I rambled quite a bit, haha.