As I crossed your path of gold - Comments

its pretty good. moree.

Aww bless Delia aint such a twat after all. I hope she stays with him.

I suppose Delia made up for herself then.
I can't wait to see what happens when they go on tour.

it is such an awesome story! hah lol it is really sweet, LOVE IT X

YEAH!
He came back. I knew he would. But what will she tell John?

Thats so sad. I hope he means it! x

Oh God.
I hope she gets the chance to explain everything to Gerard.
I love the line Mascara bleeds it reminds me of Chruch on Sunday by Green Day and I love that song so much.
Anyway, great part I can't wait to see what happens next!

ooo! I hope she doesn't hurt herself or something! I want to know whos calling her! Is it Gerard? I hope he forgives her. This is very gripping! x

I am deinately a fan of this fict!

What the hell? You defo should continue!
Saffy needs to kick her ass!
Delia? what the hell was that? Your firend invites you to a MCR party and you just wreck everything? What a tit...drama drama...
I love it loads.

I dont know weather to continue..

Goddammit Saffy, why the hell did you get your ass a boyf?
Yeah you may like him and what not but It's GERARD WAY!
Hello?
Yes, defo get with Gerard, he is so sweet in this. I love it x

*Waits excitedly for next part*

That was so sad.
But I'm kinda glad you wrote it like that, its more realistic than him saying, "hey come on tour with us!"
I loved it. I bet he'll call her.

Just to say this story isnt finished yet. may seem like it but it's not. Thanks for all the comments! x

Of course you souldn't resist Gerard!
Haha great keep going, I can really imagine that happening.

Cool keep writing. I want to know what happens next. I think it's funny that she didn't recognise him.

keep goin i want 2 know what go happen

good job =)

haha cheers! I will do

yo-ness you SO need to continue with ur pretty fly potty mouth lol! MORE MORE MORE! wooah...that sounded...disturbing and wrong if u kno what i mean lol