Another Awesome, Brilliant Chapeter added to your Amazing story! I LOVE IT! Keep me updated for the future chapters. I can't wait no no no I can but i rather not eheheh :D
:omfg: I don't even know what went on all 15 chapters. I just skipped and started reading the 16th and I was like :twitch: The plot and story line is good. A few errors here and there, but very good. :mrgreen: Maybe you could put different adjectives, more similies and metaphors. That would make the story more outstanding!! oox jane
zilly! :cheese: I just read your story so far and my first thought when I read the first chapter was ":omfg: How does she write so damn well?!" I am not even kidding. :file: Your story is probably one of the best if not the best I've read on Mibba so far! And I've read a lot of stories. :file:Please update zilly!
:twisted: Muahaha..Muahahahaha oh wow that is so cool well all of your story is cool i personally would agree to the paranoid although there are some people who might think it can be claustrophobia it's ok though those things happen don't they? Any who that was an awespme chapter to you AMAZING story can't wait till the next update and sorry i didn't comment sooner...YOUR AWESOME!! :crazy: :crazy: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :mrgun: :yah :XD :cheese: :tehe:
OH EM JAY!!! This was absolutely Awesome i can't believe it you updated it was a great chapter to the story keep writing Zilly!! First i was like because i didn't know if she was good or evil but then she was all Super cool and i can just imagine Frank being all like :yah :yah :yah :yah :yah :yah any who this was an awesome truly AWESOME story/chapter!!
Sometimes I wonder how you can write so friken well! You put me and my pathetic stories to shame. Sigh. Well, its still amazing and you better keep writing it! =D
c'mon zilly start another chapter :wait: :wait: :wait: :wait: :wait: you better grr or else hehehe i know where you live :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :mrgreen:
ahhhieh! (wow... that was a weird noise!) I love this story to death, it just makes me smile! ^^ I will now say that I was just informed that I had already read this chapter two night ago... the slap happy night (you remember right? proCUPCAKESblems!). I really dont remember that night in any way so I'm just going to pretend this is the first time I read it... and now I'm commenting ebcause yoru story is amazing! =D I love getting comments from you too Zill^^ You seriously make my dHOLY SHIT MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE IS ON TV! I'LL FINISH THIS COMMENT IN A MOMMENT!!!!!!
Oh wait... I lied. MCR wasn't on TV....... my dad was watching lotms (one of the MCR dvds, in case ya didn't know) ...... :| :| :| :| :|
Well ok thenn!! That's not weird at all!
As I was saying, you seriously make my day Zill. One day I'm going to come down to where ever you live and just appear at your window and be like 'HI!! YOU KNOW ME!!!!!! I KNOW YOU TOO! Then your mom/dad/sibling is going to be like :omfg: :omfg: Call the police!!! and then your going to be there like ZOMG ITS CORR! I KNEW SHE WOLD COME! Then your brother is going to and I'll be like ZOMGWTF DUDE THATS NOT COOL! omgno: then Jesus is all gonna come flying down and be like BLESSED BE ON YOUR SOULS! or something Jessus like and then dancing triangles are gonig to appear above our heds and we'll all dance the night away :crazy: :crazy: :crazy: :crazy: :crazy: until the cops finally come and take me away to the looney bin then their going to hire someone to try and purify the evil child but it wont do anyyyything!!!! Well anyways, its kind of a round-about way of saying it but, all Im really trying to get across is that your awesome and you need to write more of this story^^ ♥♥♥Corretta!
ahh you leve my thirsty for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i need it so bad i just updated BOTH storys i told you i would!!!!!!!!!!! is he not going to let her out the bus???????????????? what happens i need to know. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh is g sick no he can't be HaHa i have aten tooth past be for to and i was sock for three day oh it was horible AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH i need it jesus
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