so, whilst I was reading this, my dad came up to me and told me off my nose was literally two inches max from the screen, and I was so absorbed I didn't even notice.
:arms: it was amazing. I'm not normally a fan of ryan/spence, but this... worked I guess the bulimia aspect kind of got me, too ^_^
One bit of critique; you slipped a teeeeny little bit into past tense. Still, I read the entire thing - and I'm an ex-SE who is OBSESSED with picking at even the smallest mistake, so you know that I reeeaaally like this.
my nose was literally two inches max from the screen, and I was so absorbed I didn't even notice.
:arms: it was amazing. I'm not normally a fan of ryan/spence, but this... worked
I guess the bulimia aspect kind of got me, too ^_^
One bit of critique; you slipped a teeeeny little bit into past tense. Still, I read the entire thing - and I'm an ex-SE who is OBSESSED with picking at even the smallest mistake, so you know that I reeeaaally like this.