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  • poetic tragedy

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    So, I was reading this (again) and decided that if this doesn't sound like something written straight from Chuck Palahniuk, then I don't know what.

    In Love
    October 19th, 2008 at 05:30am
  • mon_visage

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    Wow.
    I can't even begin to describe how powerful and amazing that was.
    It was just...incredible
    You're an amazing writer.
    Don't ever stop writing.
    I.L.Y.
    In Love
    October 29th, 2007 at 03:23am
  • carcinogenic.

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    In Love doesn't even come close. :]
    October 27th, 2007 at 03:12am
  • Bastard Son.

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    You made me cry.
    Today was really fucking stressful and then you go and make me cry. x]]]]]

    I cannot quote the best part.
    Don't get offended. I just can't pick the best part.
    Was it the part where he just stood there, vacant and
    repeating the word DEAD until it settled in his brain.
    OR when he wished for an 'an I forgive you'. OR the description,
    the comparisons you used, the phrases you worked in.
    It was just beautiful. You weave such images with your words, powerful, disgusting and magnificent.

    You deserve to know how amazing you are.
    And even that doesn't cut it, Liz, you are really something else.
    <333333333333.

    xo
    October 27th, 2007 at 03:09am
  • carcinogenic.

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    :]]]]]]]]!
    July 9th, 2007 at 08:54am
  • GenRage

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    This put me to tears
    :'(
    but I loves it to!
    <33
    July 8th, 2007 at 12:57am
  • Plastic_ Heart;;

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    This was awesome.
    I cried.
    you are an awesome writer..
    May 9th, 2007 at 01:36am
  • carcinogenic.

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    Aww, I'm sorry Z!
    Ily bunches... feel better, hon. &#9829;
    && thank you, to you && everyone. :]
    April 24th, 2007 at 06:01pm
  • Vicki1986

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    I so fucking cried. This was an amazing story.
    April 23rd, 2007 at 11:26pm
  • Zaraza

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    Why do you always do this to me?
    And this was definitely not the best time to read this, as I am currently an emotional wreck, but thank you. I've got tears in my eyes.
    Dammit, I love you.

    Elena.
    April 23rd, 2007 at 10:53pm
  • carcinogenic.

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    Carys, you're fantastic. :]]
    Thank you soso [sosososo] much. &#9829;
    April 22nd, 2007 at 06:31pm
  • doll face.

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    I wanted to wait until all the parts were up before I read this so I knew I could just read
    it in one go. And I'm glad I did.

    This was absolutely fucking beautiful.

    I've simply bothered trying to describe how much it got to me.

    And if you don't get published soon, I'm doing it for you. It's a sin to let this much
    talent go to waste.

    I love you. Never stop writing. Ever.

    &#9829;&#9829;
    April 22nd, 2007 at 03:57pm
  • carcinogenic.

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    Thank you so, so much guys. :]]
    I was really upset over losing the original second part,
    but I think it worked out okay. :]
    I love you all.
    &#9829;
    && Xx_Amorous_Angst_xX; I love your avvie.
    April 22nd, 2007 at 02:36am
  • RachelTorres

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    Wow. The second part was great. You have a talent for making the emotions of the story tangible, and thats awesome.
    xoxo
    April 22nd, 2007 at 01:50am
  • xX SadoMasochist Xx

    xX SadoMasochist Xx (100)

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    Wow. I loved it. It was amazing. Your stories are amazing. Wow.
    April 22nd, 2007 at 01:13am
  • Solo

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    The second part was also amazing, it really upset me! Your stories are always amazing and beautifully written.
    April 21st, 2007 at 02:34pm
  • EmuVampire

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    wow...that was just as good, if not better than the first part!
    im speechless...
    BRILLIANT...god, words cant describe. it was so good.
    <3
    April 21st, 2007 at 04:04am
  • carcinogenic.

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    Thank you.
    Thank you thank you thank you.
    I love all of you. :] &#9829;

    IMPORTANT!
    THere's going to be a part 2.
    I had it completed, but I lost half of it.
    Which was really fucking upsetting.
    But I'm rewriting it the best I can,
    && THERE WILL BE MORE. :]]
    &#9829;
    April 20th, 2007 at 10:08pm
  • Solo

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    That was amazing, actually it was better than amazing. It was so upsetting you could feel the pain Frank was going through.
    April 20th, 2007 at 07:09pm
  • Zaraza

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    I really don't know what to say anymore. Words can't explain it, but I believe that you'll understand what I'm trying to say.

    Love you eternally.

    Elena.
    April 20th, 2007 at 10:04am
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