Dead. - Comments

So, I was reading this (again) and decided that if this doesn't sound like something written straight from Chuck Palahniuk, then I don't know what.

Wow.
I can't even begin to describe how powerful and amazing that was.
It was just...incredible
You're an amazing writer.
Don't ever stop writing.
I.L.Y.

doesn't even come close. :]

You made me cry.
Today was really fucking stressful and then you go and make me cry. x]]]]]

I cannot quote the best part.
Don't get offended. I just can't pick the best part.
Was it the part where he just stood there, vacant and
repeating the word DEAD until it settled in his brain.
OR when he wished for an 'an I forgive you'. OR the description,
the comparisons you used, the phrases you worked in.
It was just beautiful. You weave such images with your words, powerful, disgusting and magnificent.

You deserve to know how amazing you are.
And even that doesn't cut it, Liz, you are really something else.
<333333333333.

xo

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This put me to tears
:'(
but I loves it to!
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This was awesome.
I cried.
you are an awesome writer..

Aww, I'm sorry Z!
Ily bunches... feel better, hon. &#9829;
&& thank you, to you && everyone. :]

I so fucking cried. This was an amazing story.

Why do you always do this to me?
And this was definitely not the best time to read this, as I am currently an emotional wreck, but thank you. I've got tears in my eyes.
Dammit, I love you.

Elena.

Carys, you're fantastic. :]]
Thank you soso [sosososo] much. &#9829;

I wanted to wait until all the parts were up before I read this so I knew I could just read
it in one go. And I'm glad I did.

This was absolutely fucking beautiful.

I've simply bothered trying to describe how much it got to me.

And if you don't get published soon, I'm doing it for you. It's a sin to let this much
talent go to waste.

I love you. Never stop writing. Ever.

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Thank you so, so much guys. :]]
I was really upset over losing the original second part,
but I think it worked out okay. :]
I love you all.
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&& Xx_Amorous_Angst_xX; I love your avvie.

Wow. The second part was great. You have a talent for making the emotions of the story tangible, and thats awesome.
xoxo

Wow. I loved it. It was amazing. Your stories are amazing. Wow.

The second part was also amazing, it really upset me! Your stories are always amazing and beautifully written.

wow...that was just as good, if not better than the first part!
im speechless...
BRILLIANT...god, words cant describe. it was so good.
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Thank you.
Thank you thank you thank you.
I love all of you. :] &#9829;

IMPORTANT!
THere's going to be a part 2.
I had it completed, but I lost half of it.
Which was really fucking upsetting.
But I'm rewriting it the best I can,
&& THERE WILL BE MORE. :]]
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That was amazing, actually it was better than amazing. It was so upsetting you could feel the pain Frank was going through.

I really don't know what to say anymore. Words can't explain it, but I believe that you'll understand what I'm trying to say.

Love you eternally.

Elena.