August 3rd, 2008 at 10:33pm
this kinda confused me. i don't know why. i mean, i got it, but at the same time, it was confusing. like, why was he pretend? was it his love that was pretend? or their relationship? and for either, why?
it was very good though, you're an excellent writer.
Anywho, I agree with Raindrops on Roses all the way- excellent, excellent writer, you are.