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  • KareyBaby14

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    OMG I LOVED IT BUT YOU JUST HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT WHEN TREVA HAS THE BABY AND WHEN THEY GET MARRIED
    November 5th, 2009 at 09:13pm
  • Rocket Queen

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    Just finished catching up with this story.. ;)

    The way you described Zach and Treva's first time together was well written and tastefully done in my opinion. It didn't need to go into further detail, it was just.. perfect. :)

    Aww it was incredibly sad when Brian died. I hated how he had to die all alone.. I'd rather die with my family around me.. so it was heart wrenching to hear that Brian was alone in his final moments.

    I liked this line, that Zach said, alot: Life doesn't ask us what we want from it; we just have to learn to play the hand we're dealt or get out of the game." because it's so totally true.

    All in all, I love he detail you put into this story - it was different from your other stories and that's what I liked about it. ^^
    July 20th, 2009 at 06:37pm
  • TasteTheCourage

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    How I missed that this story ended, I"ll never know haha

    Forgive that please and know that I LOVED this story. Oh yes, I did. :-D <3333
    June 24th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • Bree.Kiana

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    ZOMFG!!!! noooo....*tear* I'm going to REALLY miss this story....oh great, I'm already going through withdrawal.... =(
    May 18th, 2009 at 05:00am
  • cynicalqueen

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    I think that was the perfect way to end the story. I think showing how his death affected Treva and the family was amazing, and it couldn't have gotten any more real than how you had made it appear. I also thought it was cute having her with child at the end and keeping it as a secret... it kind of just shows the little wonders in life. Beautiful, my dear, just beautiful.
    May 18th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • alustreya

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    AHHHH! IT DIEDDDD!
    Great story, great story indeed =] and my fingertips burn so it hurts to type this.
    ^>^

    Still... poor Brian :[
    May 17th, 2009 at 11:46pm
  • Sullivan1981

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    aww. I think you've ended this just right. Yes, it's sad about Brian, but the real moral of the story is how Treva's life changed coming to the ranch, and how she's making her life now.

    lovely x
    May 17th, 2009 at 09:56pm
  • losingXmyXreligion

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    ....HE'S DEAD?!?!
    HE DIED!!!
    ...YOUKILLEDMYBRIAN?!!???!!!!
    dude. i CRIED.
    but awesome story! awesome ending!
    May 17th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • Shadowsgirl

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    i love it!i cried on the end!poor Brian!:(
    awsome story
    May 16th, 2009 at 11:30pm
  • alustreya

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    :o that's a trippy sign haha.
    aww, it's close D:
    May 16th, 2009 at 07:30pm
  • punkxemoxrxme

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    sad ending but good one now just make a squale where they have a baby and name it brain :D lol
    anyhoe
    sad it ended as all storys do :(
    xoxox
    Denae'
    May 16th, 2009 at 04:58pm
  • kate.is.the.bomb

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    I should not be reading this drunk. But appreciate it all the same.
    wow
    absinthe is a gift. we need to discuss this ahhaha
    May 15th, 2009 at 09:57pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    My goodness Mandy, you had me tearing up there for a moment. I think with Brian gone, the story loses a bit of its innocence and recklessness. Poor Zacky, -sigh-
    May 15th, 2009 at 09:00pm
  • nolongerhere

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    Brian!
    Cry
    May 15th, 2009 at 03:36pm
  • Sullivan1981

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    oh no No
    now what's going to happen. Poor Zacky is going to be heartbroken again

    bad bad indians
    May 15th, 2009 at 01:43pm
  • alustreya

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    :O NOOOOOO! You got me teary D:
    WHY, SUHN?!

    That was incredible.
    Touchy.
    lmao but srsly? ^ Sex in the forest? Was that necessary? xDD
    The poor wild horses... must've heard some great things that day lmfao.
    May 15th, 2009 at 06:53am
  • TasteTheCourage

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    WHAT HOLY CRAP! NATIVE AMERICAN ATTACKS?! POISIONED ARROWS?! BRIAN'S DEAD? SEX IN THE FOREST?!

    You GO Mandy :) I luh this story <33333333333333333333333333333333
    May 15th, 2009 at 05:12am
  • Bree.Kiana

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    That is so sad! You made me cry *tear* but it was good...I just don't see the necessity of his death
    May 15th, 2009 at 04:35am
  • cowgrl6692

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    WHY why did you have to do that...poor brian
    the story will be so different without him
    still loved it cant wait for next update
    May 15th, 2009 at 04:19am
  • cynicalqueen

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    That was totally unexpected, hope Brian survived.
    May 10th, 2009 at 07:26pm
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