The way you described Zach and Treva's first time together was well written and tastefully done in my opinion. It didn't need to go into further detail, it was just.. perfect. :)
Aww it was incredibly sad when Brian died. I hated how he had to die all alone.. I'd rather die with my family around me.. so it was heart wrenching to hear that Brian was alone in his final moments.
I liked this line, that Zach said, alot: Life doesn't ask us what we want from it; we just have to learn to play the hand we're dealt or get out of the game." because it's so totally true.
All in all, I love he detail you put into this story - it was different from your other stories and that's what I liked about it. ^^
I think that was the perfect way to end the story. I think showing how his death affected Treva and the family was amazing, and it couldn't have gotten any more real than how you had made it appear. I also thought it was cute having her with child at the end and keeping it as a secret... it kind of just shows the little wonders in life. Beautiful, my dear, just beautiful.
aww. I think you've ended this just right. Yes, it's sad about Brian, but the real moral of the story is how Treva's life changed coming to the ranch, and how she's making her life now.
My goodness Mandy, you had me tearing up there for a moment. I think with Brian gone, the story loses a bit of its innocence and recklessness. Poor Zacky, -sigh-
That was incredible. Touchy. lmao but srsly? ^ Sex in the forest? Was that necessary? xDD The poor wild horses... must've heard some great things that day lmfao.