This is awesome, please keep it up. I wanna see how Tommy feels about her death, or if she is still dreaming . . . woah freaky ending if that would be it . . . I doubt it, I'm only good at guessing when I stare people in the face, but anyways please keep it up!
Keep going! This is such a awesome story. The girl reminds me off a character Ihad for roleplaying, only he had about 5 different voices, haha. One being Crazy. Update!!! : D