Linoleum Tiles - Comments

  • mannaquin

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    It started out dreadful, the story not the writing, but I loved the ending. complete halt with no questions. Great job.
    August 2nd, 2009 at 03:16pm
  • Sean Smith

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    Wow. I love it that this is rather sad but for a change its got a nice ending.
    Like a light at the end of the tunnel.
    It's a shame not everything turns out like this
    as awful as it is to be lablled almost unlabable so people resort to freak and dyke and so on.

    Suberbly written

    xx
    July 21st, 2008 at 03:31am
  • Kyla

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    Okay, thanks to the new rule that you can't have a collection of oneshots as a story, I'm being forced to create them as different stories.
    This is Linoleum Tiles from the collection that was originally called 'from the pages of a blank notebook'

    have fun,

    -Kyla.
    xoxox
    July 20th, 2008 at 11:22pm