To Find Freedom - Comments

This was a really great story :( it's sad to see that it seems like you won't be finishing it.

Holy cheese whiz I haven't seen this story in ages. I didn't know you were redoing it! I'm totally excited to see what's going to happen with it now.

Update please?

:) I guess I'm awesome.

I'm hoping this maid lady will be friends with Shay. That would be nice.
This makes me think of Sally (this Arabic translated show that used to come on about five years ago). I think it was called The Little Princess? I'm not sure of the show's name but it was definitely made after the book The Little Princess.

Anyways, great chapter again. Can't wait for it to pick up!

PS: Congrats! Does this mean you're free like you used to be? *hopeful smile*

"Her voice was smooth like butter, loaded with cholesterol that would definitely clog my arteries." I loved that line!
I don't know why but I did.
Audrey seems like a real meanie that was putting on a show for her family at breakfast for brownie points.
lol Update soon!

I really like this story!
I was reading it awhile ago, but forgot to leave a comment.
Oh, and I'm subscribed...
So, you'd better update!
I'll know...

Another thing, could you make the layout font just a tad bit bigger?

I actually read that question awhile back - silly me.
Anyhow, I think you should, well, I dunno. xD
Sticking with one is good, if you won't lose inspiration fast. I believe switching between stories gives you a good perspective when you try writing again. Usually, writing one gets boring after awhile. But that's just me. (and since you and I are pretty much from the same puzzle, you too?)
Having alternatives gives you more hope because if one story starts to crash, you've got another.
(Mostly why I'm busy writing a million. With this year's exam craziness, I'm postponing putting any of them up. :( )

As a reader, I don't want you to abandon any story. Makes me sad.
But as a writer, I say do as you like. :) After all, it's your story(s).

Readers: Suck it up and let her do as she pleases. :D :D

:) That was great. Paxton Canon eh?

Dedication, one way of making someone comment more. Not that I wouldn't anyways. ;)

Audrey - despite her nice name - is a mean old fart. XD

I knew I'd like Caleb. :D

PS: I'm gonna go read that question now.

PPS: Don't worry about the commenting back - I haven't been entirely free myself. More to do with restriction than study though..

Ohh hot damn her sister is mean!
I thought she would be greatful she has a sister.
Loved it!
Anser: I have no clue.You should rite on which ever ones you get ideas for. (I don't think this was helpful)
Well update soon!

Keep it the way it is. :) I dunno, I like third person but you already started it like this. :/
Forget I said anything, I confuse even myself.

Nice update, btw. I NEED THE LOVER BOY TO COME IN ALREADY. XD

Answer: Hmmmm I don't know really.
Cause it's interesting to read how every character feels about the subject and what their veiws of the situation are...?
I don't really know. but for some reason it's more interesting to read from POV's than in third person.
But if it makes things easier for you the go for it! =]

I tried to look at the question but it says I don't have permission to veiw you profile. sry.
And Oh my %$@#!!!!
Every time I see a update notification for this story my heart beats faster.
And I get too excited.
But it's cause it's awesome.
How come it seemslike her mother keeps forgetting about her?

Subscribed. :)

PS: 4 chapters, 4 comments. It's just something I do.

It's so…so…so mature! I mean, I never thought a teenager (you are one right?) could write so amazingly!

I've found a couple of mistakes here and there that don't make a difference. But I really hate it when it happens to me so I was just telling you. (in the hope that you might feel the same and want to change it. We are alike after all.)

I now have 9 fave Mibba writers. :]

PS: If, when reading, I sound like I have multiple personality disorder, it's only cuz I wrote this comment in parts. Haha, so like five to ten minutes difference between them.

Whoa. :) I got so totally lost in reading. And it's like I know their background and them all too much already. Those, dear, are the greatest stories. ;)

I always tell myself to read your stories but somehow I forget.
But I read chapter one of this :] and I'm happy to say that I wasn't surprised.
I knew it would be good.

Gah, it reminds me so much of what I wanted DALR to be like. :)

It's very interesting and I would love to see more chapters. Don't worry; I'm in no state to ask for updates so you can take as long as you want/need.

Now I'm going to read chapter 3.

This story has so much built up supension!
Like whats gonna next? And How does Adrey feel about her sister being locked up in an attic. And What was going through the dads mind when he was like 'Stick to the tradition'
Gurr update soon please.

Wait.
WHAT?!
Why isn't there a fourth chapter?!
I'm on the edge of my seat tring to see whats gonna happen and I couldn't find out!
I absolutely love this! It's different and original. Unless your goin for that wholr repunzel type thing...
anyway. UPDATE SOON! I really wanna know whats gonna happen next.

huh its ok

lol, wow, this would suck if it really happened, I would get SO SO SO SO SO bored living like shay is
defenetly interesting, keep writing!
*subscribed*