Just One of the Boys - Comments

  • Danie_Christine.

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    Oh my gosh.

    I just reread this after a year, I think?

    and I never understood the question/answer thing at the end of the chapter with Zack, and then I looked at the last pages of comments, and then it made sense, but I still had to make sure, so I kind of commenter stalked for a few minutes, and I found it to be true, and just, Oh My Gosh. That's pretty amazing.

    I really like the sequel too. Update as soon as you can please, if its not too much trouble.
    They're really great stories! Thanks for writing them.
    September 5th, 2011 at 10:23am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    This is sorta like a story that i wrote on another site a year ago... I like it.the way ellie looks fits my distripton of my girl perfictly sorta creepy how spot on you were. mabey we share brains or something.
    January 15th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • Tiger!

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    I've read a story that kind of reminded of this one. It has it's similarities and it's differences. But I can say that one of the similiarities is that I love that one and I love yours. =) Keep up the awesome work.
    May 17th, 2010 at 09:49am
  • miranda.

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    oh my lawd. this is great!
    i'm only on chapter twenty, but it's so addicting. (:
    November 23rd, 2009 at 02:04am
  • kizza :D

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    OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ALWAYS HAVE ALWAYS WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    kizza
    November 19th, 2009 at 08:10am
  • heartshapedglasses

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    I cried a little.
    :/
    Can't wait for the sequel.
    :D
    November 17th, 2009 at 07:44am
  • h8 lyfe

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    awww.. i'm glad her relationship with her mom ended on a somewhat good note =)

    SEQUEL
    November 17th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • rebel.at.heart.

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    Bah, get that sequel going!
    Puh-leeeeeease? :D
    November 7th, 2009 at 12:36am
  • BlackxLovingxBlonde

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    I had no idwa what has happened until she went and told Claudia that she cheated then i was lik WTF wait! I had to scroll bk up to recheck the names cause im like half asleep reading this i forgot the names
    October 31st, 2009 at 03:23am
  • Gypsy;

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    The last chapter is confusing! But good! I need awnsers! lol. Update soon please! =D
    October 29th, 2009 at 12:23am
  • Jagked

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    Huh yeah that one was a bit confusing .... she slept with Alex not Zack! Unless thats why you told us she was confused and just thought it was Zack..... Or she just wanted to hurt herself further... man she is in a deep ditch that will be hard to get out of.
    Update!!! :D
    October 28th, 2009 at 09:09pm
  • SweetCandy

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    Soo like I have this crazy theory right?
    I think she actually slept with Alex, cos you know.. you said she was confused & stuff. And Zack was downstairs when she left.. how could he get to the room before her ANDDD lay down on the bed comfortably? Unless it was a typo or something I read...
    Crazy huh? (:
    October 26th, 2009 at 08:24am
  • Bamm!

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    I just read this whole story in a day. amazing job really. now on to the sequel! yay! =)
    October 26th, 2009 at 06:17am
  • violets are purple.

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    Um...I looked in the other chapter...
    Was the question about Zack being buff? Whether they'd date him or not?
    October 23rd, 2009 at 08:23am
  • NyandaRose

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    this story is so so so so good i mean its keeping me on the ede of my seat i cant wait for more updates :))
    October 22nd, 2009 at 07:34am
  • Echo-Wings

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    Wow... I don't know really what to say... definitely... wow. I mean, I like the move you made for this, going completely the opposite direction of normal cliche. You surprised me woman, and I liked it. Don't get me wrong though, I'm completely hurt and on the edge and wanting to throw pointy objects at you, as well as a few blunt ones, but damn... what a curve ball. And I've recently come to appreciate the beauty of tragic love stories (but if this sequel ends in tragedy be prepared to duck). Ah... this was a fantastic story that you've written though, and I'm glad I can say I've been reading since the beginning. And you know the funny thing, I don't even like All Time Low stories!
    October 21st, 2009 at 01:19am
  • michikins

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    holy shizzz dude.
    i was not expecting that..
    October 20th, 2009 at 09:09am
  • Sister Ginger

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO US! WHAT THE DAMN HELL?!

    MORES!

    HOLY SHIT ALEX IS GONNA FIND OUT AND...Oh fuck.

    WHAT THE HELL DID SHE SAY YES TO?!
    October 20th, 2009 at 04:20am
  • ohaiGonzalez

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    holy crap! that was one of THE most amazing stories i have ever read!
    October 20th, 2009 at 03:16am
  • escapethekait26

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    “Do you two mean to tell me that if I built up some muscle, you’d date me?”

    me thinks it's that ^^ question.....and uh, you toooootally had me fooled. i thought it was alex. loved this chapter!
    October 19th, 2009 at 10:14pm