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  • acid_cupcakes

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    O_O UPDATE NOW.......
    November 28th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • meganlovesboys123

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    i like it!!! but jonna a bitch!!!
    January 20th, 2010 at 10:38pm
  • serenailith

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    I love this update. My main problem with the whole story is there is too much dialogue. I guess I can't talk much, because I use tons of dialogue in my stories, but put a bit more description in the story, and it'll be better (even though it's pretty fan-effing-tabulous already!)
    October 3rd, 2009 at 07:06pm
  • Raven616

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    okay I really lost interest in this one I'm sorry. But it's going to fast and so....unreal. I know this is a fanfiction...but even so... this is toooo Fan girlish...I'm sorry
    September 29th, 2009 at 06:11pm
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    cool! I didnt know this was a joint story. I laughed when she bought vegan food. Yeah cuz a bunch of smoking and drinking rockstars will eat that shit... Not that its bad but really? come on sweetie. Ben and Jerry wins that hands down. She's annoying, oh so annoying I can't wait for her to really get a beat down, and not just in her day dream.

    More soon?
    September 26th, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • Raven616

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    Thank you for letting me know... I really forgot this story... but it was your fault. Don't ever take a break that long again.

    :)
    August 7th, 2009 at 07:14pm
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    yay! wait no... boo the whore...

    More soon?!
    August 6th, 2009 at 09:37pm
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    yay! wait no... boo the whore...

    More soon?!
    August 6th, 2009 at 09:37pm
  • barbarienne

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    Ville Valo! YAY!!!
    I'm liking this so far.

    And the main character and I have the same name.
    Sweet. :D
    August 6th, 2009 at 09:05pm
  • Raven616

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    WOW great start Please update soon....or you desided not to?
    March 16th, 2009 at 06:45pm
  • serenailith

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    oh hot damn.
    can i kill jonna?
    she's already makin me wanna stab her in the eye with a spoon
    October 24th, 2008 at 12:10am
  • VengeanceXChickX

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    I like it. Update soon <3333
    October 18th, 2008 at 02:34am
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    Its really good so far. I can't wait for an update.
    July 23rd, 2008 at 10:48pm
  • serenailith

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    lurveeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    July 23rd, 2008 at 07:55pm
  • Ville Valo

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    I like, I really do.
    It's a really orginal idea and I can't wait for the next update ;)
    July 23rd, 2008 at 12:30pm
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