Favourite line: "I told you when we first met that I could fall in love with you, didn't I?" he asked.
That was good to read, nice and short and I didn't have to subscribe and then unsubscribe. Whoa, have you ever thought how many subscriptions you'd have if you didn't unsubscribe from teh finished stories? Like i still have people subscribed to my finished stories, and you're liek "Whoa....how many subscriptions do you have??" you know? Wow, i'm just rambling now. I honestly thought when her dad was beating her that he was going to rape her, so i was all trying to prepare myself mentally for that one... I'll stop making this a massive comment... Sunny-Lee <3
I would have commented before but my computer decided not to work so I couldnt really get online at all which sucked.lol. anyway:) I read the past 2 and i really liked them and I cant wait for more:)
Continue please! Its already so good and If that was a one shot then the ending could have been so much cuter [don't get me wrong because I "awwwww"ed out loud whe I read it] but its too good to not continue!