Why So Serious? - Comments

The lightbulb broke. (300)

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Kinda lackluster ending if I'm allowed to say so, but I guess thats what sequels are for.

August 11th, 2008 at 04:49pm

derelict-heart (100)

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This was such a great story.
I can't wait for the sequel.
:D

August 10th, 2008 at 06:14pm

FreakyChick (100)

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Yay! Me likey!!! It was so cool.

Sequel?

(your profile will now be on S.W. [story watch instead of suicide watch]).

August 10th, 2008 at 12:29am

gerards-girl (100)

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sequal soon please x
loved it!

August 9th, 2008 at 11:45pm

Lynne Siddons (100)

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Great ending, but god, what a dick he was!
XD

Course, I guess we all should have been expecting that :p

August 9th, 2008 at 06:50pm

vghdob (100)

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Can't wait for the sequel :D

August 9th, 2008 at 01:19pm

The lightbulb broke. (300)

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I'm enjoying the extra people getting shot. :)

August 6th, 2008 at 02:30am

just gone okay (100)

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AHHH!
I LOVE it.
I'm glad he got out of that asylum.
Please update soon. :)

August 5th, 2008 at 06:46am

gerards-girl (100)

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l.o.v.e.d loved it!!

August 5th, 2008 at 12:26am

dexter (450)

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I love the updates. :D

August 4th, 2008 at 11:17pm

Niall James Horan. (100)

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love the story! =]

August 4th, 2008 at 10:50pm

Spencer Smith (200)

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Great story.
Really well written.

I've subscribed xDD

August 4th, 2008 at 10:02pm

gerards-girl (100)

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No man!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE! please more. ive seen the film twice and i feel i know if off by heart, and i dont want to have to guess the next chapter. please soon ?? are you a woman of your word?

August 3rd, 2008 at 01:17am

The lightbulb broke. (300)

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I cracked up "A clown rushed in." :lmfao It justs sounds real funny.

August 2nd, 2008 at 11:54pm

derelict-heart (100)

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I'm bummed this is over
But I'm excited for the sequel!!
:D

August 2nd, 2008 at 07:21pm

just gone okay (100)

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Awwww, Harley hugged The Joker. How sweeet!
Is she falling for him?

August 2nd, 2008 at 07:01am

xXi'msodirtybabeXx (100)

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I love Joker and I absolutely love your story. I agree with "Can you hear ME?", I think Joker must be more distant, more...cold, and that Harleen will make him open.
=D
Good work!
xoxo

July 31st, 2008 at 08:08am

bazooka tooth. (100)

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Thanks so much for the feedback.
<3

Yeah, I'm kinda stuck with facial expressions, they're pretty hard to describe.

July 31st, 2008 at 07:04am

The lightbulb broke. (300)

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Pretty cool story, but one thing, The Joker...he doesn't seem cold enough towards other people...like you say he shoots someone but never how he does so...mention facial expressions or feelings...take advantage of the third person view you have going. (even though the make up would kinda make it difficult to tell :roll: )

July 31st, 2008 at 07:02am

xNellaxFacex (100)

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I love this storryyy <3

July 31st, 2008 at 06:59am